Once Upon In Love

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Jeon Jungkook, the school's hottest students, is a cool- happy go lucky boy in the outside but sad in the inside. He's suicidal. Gotta guess why?

 

Kim Yerim, known as Yeri, one of the most beautiful juniors like Jungkook, doesn't even remember her boy-bestfriend.

 

Then, a girl named Zhou Tzuyu came and tried to bring back the two of her beloved friends. 

 

Will Tzuyu really succeed in doing so?

Will Yeri remember Jungkook? 

Or will Jungkook stay alive in sadness?

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Winry84 #1
Hey ! Your story is great and the plot is very interesting ! As someone who writes since 2012 ( not on AFF) can I give you some advice ? I personnaly think that the chapters are a little bit too "quick" and short ? I don't know how to say it because English isn't my mother language but I feel like you should add more details and descriptions and maybe make a thing like one chapter = one POV I think it'll be more understandable.
I'm sorry if I sounded rude it wasn't my intention, as I said earlier, English isn't my mother tongue.
Anyways ! I'm looking forward to read the rest of your story ^o^ ♥
ega-ssi13 #2
Chapter 4: Hey new reader here... it sounds interesting as i finished reading this. But i hope, tzuyu won't fall for kookie ._. Just don't hehe... better with another girl than her. Because i love it if tzuyu and yerim are bestfriends here
NabilaBMJ #3
Chapter 2: Omoo! What happen years before????? Kookie aaa don't cryy ;(
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