Chapter 1: damn what the hell this is so good already

Chapter 3: woooow thanks for this fic :) ♥

I really thought there were three chapters this is so short YET SO BEAUTIFUL
I LOVE IT THANK YOU FOR THIS MASTERPIECE!

Chapter 3: ah loving the way you ended the story. i find it perfectly rhetorical, i guess. i really adore your writing! <33

Chapter 2: chapter two: hoLY WOW i really like this story so far, and your characters and your style of writing. i don't see many seventeen stories let alone minghao ones (bias !!!!!!!!!!) so this is a real treat /cries/

Chapter 2: omg i'm so glad i came across this while searching for minghao fics to read, i really like how the story is progressing and your writing style! not to mention that minghao's personality here is like that of mine aha. and pinky x minghao on top of that? ( my chinaline feels ) definitely a must-read!

Chapter 2: ooohhhh a minghae/jieqiong fic. this is so cute. looking forward to their budding relationship. :)

Chapter 2: Your writing styLE IS SUPER NICE AND I LOVE IT AND I LOVE THIS

Chapter 1: !!! this chapter was so cute !!!

i honestly love jieqiong's character (minghao's too, of course!) there's just something infectious about her and if i was minghao i'd totally have the same reaction tbh. and ooh, more characters! (i mean technically some of them were already mentioned in the first chap, but still.) i really, really can't wait to see where you're going with this!

Chapter 2: iM SCREAMING THERE'S A NEW CHAPTER
ok now to read it
(pls expect another comment from me after i read it he hee)