Totally Platonic

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His first kiss had been in the dark, at a party. He didn't know who it had been with, and never thought he would know.
It wasn't his proudest moment. 

Foreword

I have actually no idea how to use this website tbh, but I'm still going to post this here and see if this helps me figure out the site. This actually started out as me being trash for The Middle and being trash for Junhao.

 

SUMMARY: His first kiss had been in the dark, at a party. He didn't know who it had been with, and never thought he would know.
It wasn't his proudest moment.

Wen Junhui may not know who his first kiss was with but he knows he loves his best friend, whose smile could light up the world,  and whose eyes he sometimes got lost in, in a totally platonic way.

 

I've not posted any of my writing online in a long time and this is probably going to be rubbish but it's a one shot for now (i didn't specify whether or not it's completed because I think I might add to it later.

ALSO: I definitely didn't make it clear where this was set, they're all camping together. 

It's not important, but I think the tent pairings are:

Seungcheol and Jihoon

Jeonghan and Jisoo

Junhui and Minghao

Soonyoung and Seokmin

Wonwoo and Mingyu

Seungkwan, Hansol and Chan 

but they're not really important

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Evelyn-Everdeen
#1
Chapter 5: Even so far already this story is really cute and I'm so glad that you continued to write after that first chapter!

I think it's really cool that their first kiss was not perfect, that both of them hadn't had figured things out yet and had been inexperienced, it makes things a lot more realistic.

It's sweet to see things work out and I have to admit I'm surprised that Jun didn't realize how much he was pushing Minghao away, then again he also did have quite a lot to consider and think about... Poor him for never wanting to hurt Minghao and thenbeing the one who hurt Minghao the worst... But I'm glad they made up in this chapter and that despite Jun's predictionsof the other's memory both of them do remember the night before and what happened.

I do feel a little bad for Mimei, though... Poor cat that has been way too curious for its own good...

Jun's promise to himself is really cute, that he already knew he'd never kiss anyone but Minghao once he knows he's kissed Minghao. I'm glad he can finally stick to his promise, though I guess it's also good that both of them had some time to gain experience in the meantime~

I'm really looking forward to your next chapter and I personally think you're doing good with the fluff part :)
minseok_jagiya #2
Chapter 5: I never even noticed this updated til now !!!!!!!!! This is still just as cute and heart wrenching as I remembered it to be lol
Dichromatic #3
Chapter 2: Aww this is really lovely. I enjoyed reading the first chapter and wanted to read more. Thank you for writing something extra. Hope you do decided to put the third chapter. I can't wait to read more stories from you!
Chips_ahoy #4
Chapter 1: welcome and very nice story, thanks
ashlie_kpop
#5
Chapter 1: Lol.... I'm also not a morning person too jihoonie^^
ashlie_kpop
#6
Chapter 1: Lol.... I'm also not a morning person too jihoonie^^