Ashes

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His eyes were a weak, yet beautiful shade of grey, like ashes after a silent fire; but their warmth held immense power, the power to raise him back from ashes, the power to bring reason back to his ruined self.

 

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TheLetterV
#1
Chapter 1: Wow. This was so beautiful. Why did you stop at one chapter? I'd love to read more... I was trully captivated ♥
DolphinWorld
1977 streak #2
Chapter 1: Wow! They are so beautiful. So much emotions. An amazing fic. This author collab should happen more often. I mean you both are amazing authors on your own but when you collab like this, it turns out in another different level, like a masterpiece. Once again, this was an amazing story. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this ❤️
lily_bunny
#3
Chapter 1: such a beautiful jongyu story :)
shinyan #4
“Don’t cloud those eyes, Jinki,” He said gently, “You still have to show me the world you see with them.”

Funnily enough, the "clouding" of the dark blue of Jinki's eyes could just be some of the ash grey finding its way in. And instead of the individual sadness and fatality on their own, it seems the mix of the two colors can be entirely different together.
sabrina165 #5
Oh my heart.... I'm crying, this is so beautiful. I'm curious tho. Did Jinki’s actions caused Jjong's blindness? Am I reading it wrong? Anyways, thank you, to both of you, I felt really touched by this story.
Jinkirella~
BlingBlingMaknae
#6
Chapter 1: I love this. Angsty in some way, but yeah. it touched my heart. jjong doesnt need any eyes; he saw Jinki in a good light bc of his lack of sight. love this. so, so much. made my day. ♥
jhengchie
#7
Chapter 1: They are made for each other... Not the perfect couple but it is a destined one
31lily
#8
Chapter 1: OH MY GOODNESS!!! THIS HAS GOT TO BE THE MOST BEAUTIFUL FIC I EVER READ ON THIS PLACE!
I just KNEW I was in for something insanely good the moment you told me to read.
THIS IS SERIOUSLY SUCH A LOVELY BIRTHDAY GIFT! I AM COMPLETELY SPEECHLESS. THE MOST BEAUTIFUL ONE EVERRRR!!
I'm going to go back and read it over some more times. I JUST can't have enough of this. I love you guyssss SO MUCH!!
Thank you so much for making me feel so loved!! ;______; ♥♥♥♥♥♥
kanghaemin
#9
Chapter 1: OMG! just got back in reading ff again and you welcome me woth this awesome fic! authornim jjang!! my Onjong feels overload >_<