Can you Play

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Okay so I wrote this randomly and I have no idea what I'll be doing with it or if it will just stay as it is. Sometimes I write randomly like this. Um, I hope you guys like it and will let me know what you think. The link is https://ourcreativechaos.wordpress.com/2016/03/16/can-you-play/  And yes I know it can be annoying to have to click another link but I only post things on my blog so sorry about that. The start of it is down below by the way 

The blood splattered on the floor, staining the asphalt dark and red. He had been through this…it was repetition. He would go to work, try to bring in enough money for his son and come back home to a fist in his face. His husband screaming at him, “What kind of stripper only makes three hundred dollars? Look at yourself, you’re ing pathetic.

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Hananess #1
Yesss!!!! You are the best angst writer ever! I am always torturing my poor heart to take in so much angst cos my brian likes it too much. I would love to see a love triangle involving jackson and mark and jaebum. Jackson being the protective 'boyfriend' while Jaebum being the controlling husband. Damnnn~ my brain will definitely be satisfied with as much angst and darkness as possible. Meanwhile i'll let my heart suffer....by reading more dark angst xD (could you introduce to me some of your favourites? I have read all your stories hehehehe)
Natalie_16 #2
I like it! You write great angst stories and I feel like some jealous/protective Jackson could make an appearance so that excites me. Lol and then maybe Jaebum will get into some anger management classes and like meet Jinyoung there or something lol. Whatever happens, you know I'll be reading :)
Mautjezwik #3
Great start! This is going to be an interesting story