Chapter 2: I am melting. Really. How can Junmyeon be so amazingly charming and sweet. I reallly like how you portray Junmyeon here. It makes my heart melt. I absolutely love the last part where he tilted Kyungsoo's chin. I thought he was gonna kiss him at least on the head but he didnt so im glad cos its too soon for a kiss. LoL. Instead he preferred to tease Kyungsoo with sweet talks. I love that. Really. It feels like first love. Junmyeon is totally prince charming here. Ah I dont know why i spazz so much abt Junmyeon. My bias is Kyungsoo. LoL.

Chapter 1: Oh, this is interesting! Please continue writing! Best of luck!