This Star

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“We’re done. I realized this relationship won’t go anywhere. I don’t see myself spending the rest of my life with you. I loved you. And I thought we would last longer. But you see, I was wrong. Feelings fade away. I’m sorry. But we can’t be together anymore.”

 

“I’m sorry.” She turns her back to me and starts to leave.

“Don’t leave me.”

And then, she’s gone.

She broke it off. Our happiness. Our love.

Seven years of being together. I didn’t know it would end just like that. In 20 seconds, she ended our seven long happy years of being together. I didn’t know I was counting the seconds while she was speaking. It was like my mind was trying to block out her voice so my heart wouldn’t get hurt with her words.

 

...

 

"The one I loved without a reason is now leaving me

Our memories, I’ll cherish

The time spent with you

I realized was special

My love, love, you’re leaving me You’re leaving me now"

-GOT7 - 이.별

Foreword

 

Hello everyone. ^^

This is the first ever story I wrote which I decided to post here in AFF (I've written lots of stories but I don't have the courage to post everything) and it was inspired by GOT7’s 이.별 composed by Jinyoung so it would only make sense (for me) if I’d make Jinyoung the lead.

 

Comments are very much appreciated. I’m not expecting for upvotes because I know this is my first one and I’m still new to this and there might be a lot of flaws and loopholes in the story so please bear with me.

 

Thank you very much.

I hope you enjoy. ^^

 

(And of course, you have to listen to 이.별 while reading this just geunyang…..)

 

xx Jgailaxy xx

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Disclaimer: This story is purely a work of fiction and is a product of my very wild imagination. Any similarities to any other existing story is purely coincidental and was never intended by the author. Please do not plagiarize my works.

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KD8005 #1
Chapter 1: i love the first chapter <3
kiky_indriyani #2
Chapter 4: I cried in this cold night. It's really sad and touch my heart. I can feel the feel, when she left Jinyoung forever. Tears keeps falling down when I read her letter. This is so beautiful story even though a little bit hurt. But I like it. Thanks for writting this amazing story. I really touched and want to reread the story :)
badDae #3
Chapter 4: Why i just found this story just now?!! Omo its so sad that i cried TT Its painful but beautiful. Thanks for this amazing story authornim
maroua2706 #4
Chapter 4: I cried
pawlinne17
#5
Chapter 4: just spent my 15min break at work reading this instead of eating.. haha
i could really imagine jinyoung here, and his perfect sad expression :(
nice work!!!
thanks for the good read!
sarahk143
#6
Chapter 4: knew this was gonna be a sad one, i swear the tears are real!!! the whole story is just so beautiful in a melancholy way. ahhhh readernim, can't wait to read more of your works! x