Friendship ?

Description

I'm just a beginner author here, I tried to write a good story. Not just a good story, but an interesting story that people want to read my story :D

 

I tried to write about jessber cause so hard to find story about them. So, I decided make a story about them.

Because I'm just beginner, so sorry if it thereis mistake I made "(^_^)V

 

Hope you all enjoy !!

Foreword

There are two girls who used to bestfriend, but someday they become enemy because the friendzone. One of them thought that they can be a couple, but she was wrong. Her friend just thought they're just friend, so she didn't noticed her friend feeling towards her.

 

How come they become enemy ? Because of what ?

Let's see in the next chapter ;)

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rmanalo #1
Chapter 5: Broooo plss update
Va_asianloverz #2
Chapter 5: please update soon
XavierThorpe #3
Chapter 5: Update soon please.
frans89 #4
Chapter 5: I wish for Jessber, dear author-shii, please?

Keep updating, i will subscribe you. :D
iya_007 #5
Chapter 5: Ohh hanging in the moment....i wonder how the perform is going to turns out :D

This is a good Jessber story...i LOVE it...keep up the GOOD work :D
ssgsperera #6
Chapter 5: he he its really good author.thank u very much for ure update.
ssgsperera #7
Chapter 4: please update soon author
aLakezt #8
Chapter 1: Okay, interesting :)
Its the first time I m reading jessber ff :D
So.let me continue to next chap
slho901 #9
Chapter 4: " spicy sauce slippers and cow's head soup" that makes me laugh so hard... XD....

oh dear... juny98, juny98,juny98....our authornim is stressing me with jessber ending... haha....
but authornim, I thought I already did a jessber ending in my previous story of Jessica and Mber? That is Jessber ending already...did you forget about my story so fast?...*pout and with tears threatening to fall.*
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You did a great job as a starter, way better than me buddy!

As your friend and a good reader, please allow me to share my thoughts, I got a little confusing when you wrote someone talking and then in the same line, you continued with Amber's thoughts. Maybe you can finished the sentence and start a new line for Amber's thoughts? or maybe italicized it? Just a suggestion. ^_^

Keep writing and you will be better and better, right DIC_0428 ? *pulling DIC_0428 in and looked at her for response*

Just a suggestation
DIC_0428 #10
Chapter 4: No problem dude.kekeke

Im actually scared if Amber knows Jessica's feelings toward her what would she do?? Would she break up with Taeyeon and be with Jessica or maybe she'll rejects Jessica.
Haish..... It's so complicated but I really also want a Jessber ending and maybe Taeny in the end too. Hehehe. *I just love seeing everybody has a good ending*.

And by the way your story is really getting better and super interesting. I also wonder if there would be a " Clash of Taengsic" for Ambers heart.

Again Thank You and Hwaiting!!!
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