Chapter 1: Okay~ after reading this so beautiful work ... More than 10 times already ~ I wanted to comment again ~ I just noticed some things I didn't noticed before.
Specially the frame of the story, the choice of words and your writing style.
You had successfully delivered what the emotions in your story to the reader. The place where Key feels his last moments and still trying to be useful for Jjong. And the moment where Jjong finds out that the love of his life is dead... That moments are so beautifully written that I felt like I'm already seeing those events take place infront of my own eyes. The way you ended the story is very authentic!
I really love this story a lot! I wish you all the good luck in the world! Please create more masterpieces like this! Love you author-nim ~ ( these are my honest feelings after all!)
Chapter 1: Ahhhhhh my heart ;;;; poor kibum ;;;; and poor jonghyun ;;;;; I don't even have any words to describe these feelings ;;;;; You conveyed the emotions well! What a heartbreaking (but great!) story <3
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