Unseen

Your Melody Remains
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A blood curdling scream resounds around the forest in which a large mansion is set. The birds can be seen flying away from their shelter under the trees near the mansion due to the shock. 

"Shut up! What the hell is wrong with you!?" A man with a muscular build barked as he held down the woman who screamed. The other two persons looked at her with an apologetic and puzzled look as the womans' eyes widened again as she looked behind the man.

"Why..." Her voice trembled and her whole body was pale and shaky, "Why can't you see her!? She's right there!" She screeched with tears in her eyes as she pressed the buzzer that hung from her neck. 

 

The lady and the two men watched as she left, running on the stone path towards the gate that the butler of the house held open for her while bowing. 

"Well, that just leaves three of us." The lady who held a  cigarette in her hand said. She looked at the other two who were already making their way slowly towards the stairs that led to the top floor.

"Hey! We are not allowed to go there!" She whispered harshly as not to let the butler who appears in a blink, hear her. 

"Ailee, don't you think it's strange? How 25 people left the competition because they saw something? What if this is all just a con to scare us? What if the reason they don't allow us to go to the top floor is because all the controllers or props they use are all up there?" The man with the muscular build said. The other young man who was following him looked at Ailee and then at the other man. 

"I don't think we should go... I don't have a good feeling at all..." He said quietly as he took a step back.

"Ren, five million dollars! If we solve this mystery and if we go up there and switch off those things, we can survive the next 3 days and win five million dollars! Stop getting scared now! You didn't last this long because you were scared, come on now!" The muscular man frowned as he said this. Both contestants looked at him and decided to follow him.

"Sheang is always so bossy..." Ailee whispered to Ren who held a lamp above him as he followed Sheang who was only a few steps ahead. 

"I agree. But, we can't do anything about it. He's very determined to find out the secrets of this house." Ren answered as they came to a halt towards the room at the end of the hall. 

"I saw light coming out of this room.." Sheang said as he tried to look through the keyhole. There sure was some light spilling from under the double doors of the room. He pushed the door open without a warning and they all got surprised when the room was completely dark. 

"I'm pretty sure the light was still on when I pushed the door..." Sheang said whose frown got deeper. He took several careful steps inside before completely walking through the long corridor that they didn't know where it led. The other two followed but stayed behind a few steps from him. 

The room was even colder than outside and the cold was almost biting into them. In this time of summer, this temperature was abnormal for any room no matter how long it was closed. 

They came to a halt when Sheangs' flashlight showed something so sickly the other two were frozen at the spot.

"Hmph. it's just a real life like doll. Don't get fooled!" Sheang said as he inspected the "doll" that was hanging by countless strings attached to different parts of her body, sewn in and out of her skin in a way that looked like she was hanging by the support of her body. She had worn a gothic lolita dress with blood splattered all over it and upon her pale blue skin, her jet black hair covered her face as her head hung downwards. What made them sick were her cleanly cut feet sitting on a chair beside her body.

"We... we should leave, Ailee... this man is crazy.." Ren urged her as he held her hand tightly, but before they could run, their blood drain

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Dollhouse32123
#1
Chapter 19: Can't believe I'm around 10 chapters from the ending (that's a very late comment) There is enough content and elements on the plot - I have to admit: it became my favorite of yours on this aspect. - that could be mistaken by a published book for the quality level, just by changing the characters names.
Is amazing, I'm only have to complain about the fact that is near to ending.
Shik_Taek
#2
Chapter 30: I love happy endings!!! Thank you for this!!! And I love your parting words. It's motivating.

Thank you for this. :))
Shik_Taek
#3
Chapter 29: Nooooo!!!! Where's Ravi???!!! Don't tell me he vanished??!! That can't be!! Hoooo ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ!!!
I'm really happy Ravi now knows it's Taekwoon whom he love ever since.
Shik_Taek
#4
Chapter 28: I know I'm late but.... OMG!!! Taekwoon is here to save Ravi!! Poor Sarah. :( Glad she helped Taek. I love WonTaek's reunion even if the situation's a bit off.
hanistar99 #5
Chapter 30: Woahhh it's really nice-written ♡,♡ your writing is too vivid and make me shiver in fright hehe but DANG!! I love reading tough-but-fragile Taekwoon huhuhu my poor Taekwoon... Dont you worry, now Wonshik can help you with your trauma huhu
Luxe911
#6
I really enjoyed the story. It's very detailed and planned out. Keep writing more stories <3
parkhasjam
#7
Chapter 30: oooooooOOOOO this story finally came to an end. Man, Ill be damned if i dont say that this is the best story ive ever read. i kept on being so excited for you to update and ahhhh.. It paid off ^0^ thank you so so so much for writing this beautiful and amazing story. Sincerely, i loved it so much and thoroughly enjoyed every bit. it was beautiful
fourteenlove #8
Chapter 30: Ah this was beautiful. Thank you for writing this amazing fic.
SoneStar #9
Chapter 30: A beautiful ending for an amazing story