Chapter 1: OH MY F***ING GOD!!!! I AM STILL NOT OVER CRYING!!!!!!! Seriously, How could you make a person cry and laugh at the same time!! Oh god!!! oh god!!!!!
Chapter 1: Oh my god! This was amazing to read but at the same time so sad ㅠㅠ
Though what you did with the letters of SHINee was very clever as it tied in with the scene in the Boys Meet U MV when they have the sparklers. Jjong does the "H" and Key does the "ee".
I don't know if that's where you got it from or its me being trash. But it was very clever.
Chapter 1: it was amazing ^^ but a little too fast.. maybe because you wanted to keep it as a one-shot. i think it would have been better with like.. two or three chapters. awesome plot, and your writing style is also great ^^ i almost cried when i thought Jjong died..
you should definitely write more!!
this was an AWESOME first fanfic. i loved it :)
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