Chapter 1: D:<<
a picture speaks a thousand wrds?
well i'm just feeling so damn depressed for namjoon, he doesn't deserve this treatment and all ):
being forsaken and made used of only to be thrown away later on is horrible
and zico... ah damn authornim, don't link the story to real life issues, now i'm thinking too much XD
hahahaha but i do hope zico really do learn from his mistake and stay faithful to loco /:
and it's nice linking the story to a song too ~

Chapter 1: Mother fuc**** Zico!!!!! My poor Namjoon! /cries in a corner/
Btw u are getting amazing at describing feelings, your characters are getting more n more relatable.
N yes i gotta go with my chingu creyes1987 on this one, i dont feel like Loco n Zico will work out, Zico kept way too many things n relationships are all about trust

Chapter 1: No Happy end but at least he learned he should never be second choice to no one. Always value yourself.

He found himself wriiting on how he felt and created a song w/his feelings on it. How many people can say I wrote a song about my personal life and shared it w/the world.

As for Zico he's so wrong in so many levels. Cheating, lying, backstabbing, too face, jerk, butth*le. Even though he ended the relationship he could have been a man about it and told him face to face.

Even though Zico and Loco are married now their relationship might seem doomed because who knows along the way. Zico might feel guilty and let Loco know what had happen each time they fought.