Hey guys, my first novel Guardians of Shalimaar is on Amazon. The ebook is $2.99 USD. The first 6 chapters are free. Go check it out! Follow me on Goodreads under the name Sania Asghar.
Chapter 9: OMG, it was sooooo goood. I cried so much. It was sweet, fluff, innocent and heartbreaking in certain ways. But all in all, it was a beautiful young love.
Chapter 9: Wow, I have to admit that when he threw away her present I was disappointed but I saw your reply to another person's comment that that was his way of dealing with the pain she left him with so I understand. I really hope you're thinking of a sequel! But even if you're not, I'd just like to really commend you for writing this story. Before I read it I saw all the comments saying that it was sad, but I embarked upon it anyway because my mindset is that it should be about the story, not the happy ending, and your story is an exemplar of that quote. I really enjoyed the way you wrote as well, so many of your descriptions were really unique and even your vocabulary was very well-selected and on point, I learnt a few words myself so thanks for that! I even found the relationship between Yowon and Hanbin very indescribable just like she said in her letter, not really something that could be pinpointed or defined, but there was definitely a beauty in that ambiguity. I also really liked how you explored the competitive Korean society and centralised it in the story like how she couldn't make time for him because she was so swamped by her studies and everything else that was going on in her life -- I love it when writers put realism in the story. Just a few things I want to clarify, who was the guy who was hitting her when Hanbin saved her? Just a stranger? And the person she's visiting in the hospital? Sorry if these are very obvious questions I'm just slightly confused, and I guess we can deduce that she went to study abroad at the end?
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