"We are all suffering from the condition called drapetomania, the overwhelming urge to run away" Life is harsh. but teenage life is brutal. we've all had that urge to run away. to let go of everything and leave, not even leaving a note for our dear family. But it's not like you ever would do that, right...? Seven childhood friends are separated from eachother before highschool begins. Some move, some are not allowed to go out anymore and some are just afraid. Each of them have their own unique story and problems, some scarier than the other. But when the last year of highschool comes around everything will change. The one who was caged, the girl who name was Nabi didn't want to be stuck in this hellhole called home anymore and decided to run. To Run far far away. She then remebered her old friends, so if we're going to run what better way is there but to run together? Runaways is a story about the hardships in life and friendship.Rules to apply ✘ Subcribtion is a must, okidoki? ✘ No bashing or i will personally come after you and hit you with a frying pan! ✘ You can apply as both a boy and a girl. ✘ Of course you can apply twice or three times if you so want to. ✘ Don't apply if you can't handle angst and triggering things, okay? as this story will have a lot of that. ✘ If you have ant questions don't be afraid to ask! ♥ ✘ Have fun, don't stress yourself out and if you ever want to talk here i am ♥
choco's note
Hello it's choco here and i hope that you enjoy my story. I've had this idea for a while and got even more inspired when i watched bts's new mv's and listened to the albums! I hope you like and want to apply to my sad and angsty applyfic. The DEADLINES is set to
february 19Post some comments and say what you think, yeah?
I'm sorry that I haven't been updating :/ there has been much going on and I don't have the inspiration and I want to write a good chapter for you all ^-^
Chapter 7: This was pretty good! It's great to see more development of Nabi's character through her personal struggle. As well as showing the effect of the exposure to her parent's environment and how much that's taken a toll on her as a person. You see just feel like life is hell. Even so far as to assume she's dead when she wakes up. It was an overall great chapter and the plot is obviously there. I can't wait to see the group dynamics especially after so much time has passed. But I also can't wait to see more character development not only individually but as a group. I also what to see the overall evolution they have as friends. To actually be happy past the bitterness and sadness that is life. To actually find something to live for and bind them together forever as friends. It was also great to see Tak appear. Tbh I didn't expect to see him as the first character introduced but it was a pleasant surprise.
Anyway I apologize for not commenting/reviewing earlier it's just I ended up going overseas for my birthday for quite awhile. But anyway you did great on this chapter. I honestly can't wait to see more. Whether it be introductions, development or plot because you got something in your writing and it's great.
Chapter 7: Nabi! Poor girl, I just want to give her a huge hug. I really loved the chapter and the ending. I can't wait to read the next ones!
If you were to ask Minah who her favourite fairytale character used to be, Minah would have said Wendy. She dosen't fully remeber the story if Peter Pan but she always wanted someone who could show her a beautiful life , someone who could take her away and make her forget all the hassles of life and make her feel extremely happy. But if you were to ask her now, she would probably just ignore you and say something about how fairytale are meant for little kids so why would she like them?
As for my favourite fairytale character... it's too hard to pick one. I always really loved Beauty and the Beast growing up so probably Chip!
Chapter 7: all while reading this chapter, i kept praying for nabi. she seemed so weak and frail, and it's very dangerous to be in a big city like seoul on her own ㅠㅠ like, people are bound to take advantage on her.
I REALLY LIKE THE WHOLE PARAGRAPH ON WHERE NABI STARTED SHOUTING. ok, idk, she was wishing on her death but that part really gets to me. ;;; AND OMG HAHA KWAK INNA + COFFEE = TRUE. i laughed so hard and then felt like crying bc.. the current inna probably won't write that stuffs up again.
anyways!! this chapter is AWESOME as hell, and i really like the way you write and haejin, many thanks for finding our nabi. ;;
inna's favorite fairytale?? i think it would be the pied piper of hamelin???? the pied piper was betrayed, right?? of the villagers, so he ended up leading their kids somewhere else. in a way, he's like inna. she was betrayed, and so she leads everyone astray with their false impression of her.
mine? i like robin hood. i have 0 idea why i like fairytales with male as the lead, but hmm. robin hood is a cool guy -- he steals, but for a good reason. haha. aaa i guess that's that? ♡♡
Chapter 7: Oh no poor Nabi D: I really feel for her, man this fic is gonna hurt me so much why did I do this to myself? (because I'm a er for emotional hurt, that's why). It's a good thing she found Haejin, he should help. I feel like he's the one who's got his together the most out of all of them, and considering he's homeless that's really quite telling.
Oh no you're gonna make us think xD As he is right now I think Junseo's favourite fairytale would be the Little Mermaid because it has a sense of escaping, but also the original fairytale doesn't end happy either and Junseo is in such a bad place right now that he would identify with that as well.
As for me, when I was little I really used to love the princess and the pea, though for the life of me I don't remember why xD
Chapter 6: can you hear hysterical screaming noises??
that's me. oh my god, i'm so happy to see inna being on the charas' page! i spent a lot of time on her app and she's a portrayal of me, so i'm really.. protective over her. ♡ thank you for choosing her, really!
also, the other characters seemed really awesome too. especially woori, like, she's intriguing! her description it a+. also! oh, my god.
the prologue is so cool! first of all, your writing style really suits this genre. aaa and you wrote inna perfectly well, don't worry about that and also, don't worry about not updating. i'm pretty busy, too, exams are coming up. (also, i love inna's interactions i could tell that you really pay attention to the way i wrote the interactions in my app!!)
: conclusion? i love this. so, so much. ㅠㅠ this gives me a k-drama feel, you know.
Chapter 6: I loved the way you wrote Minah and her reaction to Minhyun. I liked the way all of the characters seemed to bounce off each other like real friends ;; ;; I can't wait for the rest of the story! But please don't rush. School should come first! I wish you all the best with your school stuff!
Chapter 6: Woah I didn't expect an update so soon what a wonderful surprise! Your writing style is really nice to read and you wrote Junseo perfectly. I feel so bad for all of them, they don't even know ;A; I'm so hype for the story, but also good luck on school stuff!!
Chapter 6: I love it! ;¬; Can't say much about how you portrayed Woori considering she wasn't there (;P) but I love how Nabi referred to it as a "stupid church camp", that's definitely how I figured most of the group would view her devotion~ I really like all the characters though, it's so sad they're not going to see each other again for such a long time ;; This has definitely got me even more hype for the story though, I love your writing voice!
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