Don’t Walk in the Darkness

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Minghao woke up in an unknown bed with no clear recollection of last night and two small bite marks on his neck. He’s then abruptly into the hidden world of vampires where he met Junhui, a pure blood vampire. vampires!au

Title: Don’t Walk in the Darkness

Word Count: NA

Rating: PG-13; erm... vampires?? attempted ual assault and slight gore

Fandom | Pairing(s): Seventeen | Junhui / Minghao

Author’s Note: i needed more junhao so i'm writing more junhao :> and i apologize for this hot mess of a fic

Foreword

His eyes were wide with fear and panic, his blond hair messy from sleep but what caught his attention the most was the two, small bite marks on his neck.

A shiver ran down his spine as Minghao stared fixedly at his reflection. The two bite marks seemed to leer at him the longer he stared at them.

Oh my... Strangely enthralled, Minghao tentatively reached for the protruding bite marks that interrupted the otherwise smooth skin, his reflection mirroring his actions. His fingertips brushed the bite marks hesitantly, curiously and almost immediately, Minghao hissed in pain at the rush of pain.

They’re... They’re real. Minghao gasped in a mix of interest and disbelief. He ghosted over the bite marks, the novelty of them disappearing and getting replaced with horror. Shocked, Minghao withdrew his hand from the marks, reality hitting him like a brick wall.

Minghao’s terrified eyes met his reflection’s identical pair as his mind tried to process everything at once but coming up as a jumbled mess of thoughts. But — But that means — But, it can’t be — I can’t been — They’re not —

Someone cleared his throat behind Minghao.

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veIvetdiamond #1 Mar 15, 2019 16:52:04

I'm just scrolling through my subscriptions list and I found this story again! Looks like I found a new way to waste time tonight!

I miss vampire! JUNHUI!

Evelyn-Everdeen #2 Jan 8, 2019 22:31:51

Chapter 5: Woah, this was so good! I don't even know where to start with my comment...
There were two thoughts in the first chapter (I just don't remember which ones TT.TT) that made me laugh a lot! Not to forget Junhui's facepalm in the end!
There were so many sweet things in here! Though I feel like there are a few questions that remain unanswered. Who was that woman from the pictures in the first chapter? In which way is she maybe important since she was so specifically mentioned? And what about all of those murders?
I like how you stressed the question of consent throughout the entire story. Whether it was in the second chapter when Junhui gets upset about the impure touching Minghao without consent or the general debate about Junhui promising and sticking to the fact that he won't drink from Minghao unless he is given consent to do so. I also really like that the age factor doesn't become a topic until the very end, that it's just generally not deemed important.
All the thought processes are also really cool! Some of them are super hilarious while others show the doubt and the fight that these characters go through in order to do the right thing, that was really sweet to see. I also like how real you keep things especially in the end where Minghao decides against moving in with Junhui head over heals.
You had me really startled, though, in chapter three (I think?), though I had a feeling that something was off with the way Junhui behaved in the last passage. I was still super relieved when it turned out that it was only a dream! You generally use cliff hangers and chapter endings soooo well!!!

Thank you for this wonderful, sweet story! I enjoyed reading it a lot!