Our Golden Maknae

Description

The Golden Maknae, Jungkook, gets sick from overworking. It turns from a fever to something much worse. 

Foreword

The rainy day definitely made the day ten times worse. Jungkook was pretty sure that he wan't feeling so great. Each dance move feels like a thousand years. He didn't know if it was only him but the room seemed alot colder than when they first came to practice and he didn't sweat at all. This wasn't good especially since the rest of them were dripping with sweat but still full of energy. Jungkook on the other end looked like a zombie with dark eye bags and a thin figure. It wasn't long into the dance practice for their comeback before he was already willing to collapse. No, have to practice. We have to learn the dance before next week. Jungkook thought to himself and shook his head to wake himself up. The members of BTS had already gotten the dance down yesterday but Jungkook keeps making mistakes.  

"Jungkook, you have to wake yourself up and remember the dance. I expect you to have it perfected by tomorrow. Keep practicing." Their choreographer scolded Jungkook before leaving without another word. As much as the members hate to admit it, Jungkook has to remember the dance. They had to leave their cute maknae in the dance practice room alone. The maknae was slumped on the ground not making a effort to move until ten minutes after.

"I have to practice. For BTS, for A.R.M.Y." With that resolution to keep Jungkook going, he stood up even with his heavy and pain racked body. He practiced into the night but his body failed to function him again and again. He kept falling, tripping, hurting. He wouldn't let himself take a break from the guilt of not being able to perfect the dance. He danced for hours and hours even in his worst condition. When is the limit? He didn't know.   

 

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koooooookieah #1
Chapter 21: It’s 2019 and I’m waiting!!!!!! Always will be waiting... please don’t leave this ff if you haven’t already..... I’m just dying to keep reading
rokuisthename #2
Chapter 21: Oh and no pressure intended. I love this fic with a passion, but your personal life and health, education, ect. Is more important to all of us. Sorry we're all hungry for more, we just LOVE this SOSOSO much. A well thought out story, In love???
rokuisthename #3
Chapter 21: OKAY but you have no idea how much I ABSOLUTELY LOVE this fic. I need updates as soon as possible???????
Leah_Black #4
Hi!!
Please don’t leave this ff I really wanna know what will happen with Jungkook and the others. Xoxo
IlyanaAna
#5
Chapter 21: Please update soon
Airishi #6
Chapter 21: Please update soon Author-nim..... :D :D :D
Leah_Black #7
Chapter 20: Hi!!!
Please don’t let us hanging! I wanna know what is going to happen with Kookie. xx
Airishi #8
Chapter 20: wow!! fantastic. You're a superb writer did you know?.... You really caught a readers attention with this kind of twist, I tear up a lot on how emotional your story is... I just rarely read fanfic because some of them are only repeating its plot and , but here I am interestingly reading your fanfic. Thank you very much for the good story and I can only say is that JOB WELL DONE!!!... I hope you will continue on updating, I can't wait on reading your update soon. (big thumbs up)
Philosophies
#9
Chapter 21: While this chapter is upsetting, it's nice that Seokjin's parenting instincts still work!

And no need to worry about the updating schedule. School is more important.
XxAiko_16xX
#10
Chapter 20: PLS UPDATE SOON OMG AUTHOR NIM QAQ ❤❤❤