Give Me More Time

Description

" You don't deserve her. Just leave her alone and
I'll be the one who will take care of her and
give her that one thing that she deserves for a long time ....  "
  

" I'm sorry that I love you. But .... "

" Just go away. Give me back my precious love and I'll ..... "

Foreword

Author's POV : 

I'm new to writing fanfic. Tbh, I'm not so good at writing. But I'll try my best to give all of you a great story!  All of the idea, all of the way of writing is 100% my idea. Any resemblance in the storyline, I apologize beforehand because I'm not intended to do so. 

Please do njoy reading this story. To HIGHLIGHT, English is not my first language. So, I'm sorry if there are grammar errors, wrong use of words everywhere. Do subscribe and upvote. It means a lot to me. 
 

*NEW ANNOUNCEMENT*:  I left this story hanging in 2017 and I'm back after 4 years. So I'll try to continue and rewrite the story starting from Chapter 8. I'm trying to get a hang of it. I hope you will look forward to the story. This story will be written in another language by someone else in my company that I'm currently working at. I hope it is good (at least). 

So please, do leave a comment regarding my storyline so I can improve in the future. Thank you. ^^

 

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Yoonsa66
#1
Chapter 9: Thankyou for update:")
im still waiting for your hanmi story;3
aluminina #2
Chapter 9: Thanks for update
bbomi_02 #3
Chapter 8: Update soon
mika_lou #4
Update soon ...please :-)
loveYM
#5
You welcomee.. This is interesting
loveYM
#6
Chapter 6: Waaaah.. There is ken here.. I love Ken too.. I was spazzing for awhile when Ken met Bomi.. Haha~
Turned out he is Suzy's partner in this story, right? But its okay.. They're both in one fic is enough.. Hehe

Like it so faaar.. But why is luhan isnt appearing..;(
loveYM
#7
Chapter 4: Nice story.. I've always liked Hanmi.. But why Luhan is a jerk here? Huhu..

Anyway you should insert bomi or luhan so more people will easily find this fanfic :)