Doll Complex

Description

When Sehun was a child, Luhan was his favourite toy.

But now that he'd grown up Luhan had been discarded, tossed aside, and abandoned.

Luhan doesn't really mind. Sehun will come back to him one day - that's what he tells himself.

Foreword

This will probably be very short but it does hold a deeper meaning that it probably first appears to (if you don't get it from the first chapter, there will be an epilogue which will hopefully shed more light on it).

I hope you enjoy it~

 

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13xhun
#1
Chapter 2: What? I- just- can someone please explain this to me?
melilianmenglu
#2
Chapter 2: I had to read this twice and convinced myself that i rlly understand when i dont even know if i really understand. But it's written very beautifully and i think i kinda get what u're trying to convey. Luhan's a human but was treated like a doll. Is it? Hahahahaha this is quite angsty for my poor soul TT-TT but it's really good!!
lilacks #3
Chapter 2: damn. im gonna have to let that sink in for awhile because holy .
unazucky #4
Chapter 2: I'm not going to lie...I had to read the epilogue 2 times before it finally made sense. I personally loved Luhan's perspective. It was heartbreaking but I think the message was conveyed beautifully. I loved it. Thank you so much for your story.
oohxxx
#5
Chapter 2: ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡ T.T
Mikkae #6
Chapter 2: Thank you for writing for this, very interesting and poetic. although it's a different analogy and premise, it reminded me of Kafka's Metamorphosis (where a son was treated like a roach and ended up feeling like one, I vaguely remember it was symbolism for persecution of a group of people.)
Greyson #7
Chapter 2: Y am i crying? oh god. this is beautiful! i have a lot of dolls. When i was a kid, i used to tell my mom to buy me dolls because i really loved them but now Im already 17, i dont play with them anymore T_T as far as i know, the last time i touched them was like,uh, 5 years ago? when my friends suddenly barged into my room. I always play with them when i was young. oh gosh. i think i need to say my apologies to them. i feel so mean. another reason is after i watched the movie "chucky" u know the killer doll, i become scared. TT__TT Thank you so much for this story!! <3


i hope they are not mad at me.
DevilNextToYou #8
Chapter 2: Omg so sad T_T
So it's like becoming vegetable?
But how can Sehun develop feelings for someone who can't even respond to him it doesn't make sense
Unless Sehun knew him before he became vegetable
Panda-Chu
#9
Chapter 2: This... is...
This sound like...
Lu's not a doll, but a human who thinks he IS one.
And for some reason, he can't move. I mean, he can blink, but...
Quadriplegic? From the "unpreventable accident" at age 8?

And Sehun loves him very much (romantically as well, poor boy)... but nothing can happen...

Damn. ;;
fullsunana #10
Chapter 2: I don't understand the whole story now