Out of Mind

Description

You’ve weaved your own world with perfect rows of threading. The sheet was tangled and torn, but now that it’s fixed the skeletons of your closet can be blanketed in a neat, inconspicuous darkness. Too bad it’s flimsy and the slightest tug by an outside source can whisk it away and remind you of an inescapable truth; imperfection.

Foreword

Another story in the archives of Word that I edited today instead of working on my 4 essays. I kind of hate my 'chaptered' story, like a lot, and I felt like I needed to purge myself of it. So here we are, enjoy~.

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javasunshine19 #1 Mar 29, 2012 10:11:08

Aside from the fact that this fanfic revolves around a really refreshing and brilliant plot line, I also like it because I can relate to it.
I really feel like that to understand people better, you have to hide any emotions or signs of weakness, ultimately building a wall to the point of almost feeling like your living for someone else's problems on some days.
But it is also comforting in a way; it's like a reminder that sometimes, it totally okay to let go of the walls around you and just be you.

Keep it up, and I'll really look forward to your other stories. :)

crestrisen #2 Mar 4, 2012 07:09:49

I still come back to this fanfic to reread its cold yet soothing nature. The feeling I get is indescribable, it's like a perfect piece of work to me, subject matter, characterization and all. You should really write more. <3