Wolf - Primal Instincts: Part 1

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Luhan is in a new town, a new school.  He quickly becomes friends with Kai and Kyungsoo and their rag-tag group of friends and a girl he can't seem to stay away from.  This is his fresh start.  His only goals: keep his past in the past and keep his secrets hidden.  Oh, and to stay out of trouble. 

(A story based off EXO's Music Video Drama)

Author's Note:
This started out as a writing exercise using Exo's Drama Version MV, but it expanded and turned into a story.  I tried to answer all the questions the MV didn't while sticking as close to the MV as I could.  If there's a question I didn't answer, I hope you'll ask me!  I hope you enjoy it enough to leave me a comment!  I love constructive criticism, so if you think there's an area I could improve on please let me know.  Happy Reading!

As of October 2015:

Part 1 (which was originally included in the same story as Part 2) is now it's own story!  It has been expanded with new scenes and more information about the characters.  Nearly 4,000 new words and 2 new chapters.  Be sure to read it before Part 3 comes out!

 

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Wolf - Primal Instincts: Part 1 (revised)

Wolf - Primal Instincts: Part 2

Wolf - Primal Instincts: Part 2: Missing Chapter

Wolf - Primal Instincts: Part 3

Foreword

Luhan and Kris met in an abandoned building.  Luhan still hadn’t figured out how Kris was always able to find him, but when Kris said he would be there, he was there. 

“I’m worried,” Luhan admitted as he and Kris stood face to face in the dirty hallway.  “I hate being the new kid at school.  And what if what happened last time happens again here-“

Kris shifted his duffel bag to his left hand and laid his right on Luhan’s shoulder and silenced him.  It was his tattooed hand.  Luhan glanced at it.  From this angle, the black ink shimmered blue.

“Everything is going to be okay,” Kris said.  “I wouldn’t have sent you here if it wasn’t going to be.  You’re just going to be a normal kid at a normal school.”  He squeezed Luhan’s shoulder and then continued walking down the hallway.  “Just stay out of trouble until I come back.” 

Luhan watched him walk away before he turned and walked the opposite direction.  He really wanted to believe Kris.  He wanted to believe him more than anything.  Everything is going to be okay, he repeated to himself.  I’m just a normal kid attending a normal school.

Luhan was determined to make it true.  He was determined to keep his past in the past and his secrets hidden. 

At the other end of the hallway, Kris turned to make sure Luhan had gone before disappearing himself. 

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Cellywelly
#1
Chapter 6: -adele voice- hello, it's me....
LOL ok anyway I just wanted to let you know that I rlly enjoyed this, I'm SO WEAK for wolf au exo and I reaaaally like how you used and expanded on/are expanding on the music video! I love how loyal and tightly-knitted you've made the group also, and Sohee is a pretty awesome character.
Also your writing is on point, you move between points of view so fluidly it's great @_@
EXOLuhan_
#2
Chapter 7: Good job! Its amazing
JasonLee4848 #3
Chapter 5: I am loving this Fanfiction so much! This is the type of Fanfiction that I've been looking for. I hope you keep writing such amazing stuff and I will be looking forward to more in the future :)