Love Shadow ( Like A Lier )

Description

At Hospital Room

" why she ..... why it's not me ... she is living as me ... but she is not me ... she's dead for you  ... she can't take anything i own ... i own you chang min " Do hee said to chang min 

" how could you ?? " chang min asked 

"  you said you love me for me ..... but now you want her .. " Do hee said to chang min 

" but i told you how much she means to me .... " chang min said and tears falling 

" yeah ... i was just a game for you too .... that's right " Dohee said 

" sorry but i don't love you anymore " chang min said 

" yeah ... excuse me .. i just want to stay out of your game ... oh by the way ... you don't own Min Jung " Dohee said while she leaving 

 

Foreword

anyyeong everone ... this is my first fic here ... i hope you like it guys ....i hope you guys have fun reading it .. oh by the way sorry for the mistakes .... gomawooo

i want to thank this great shop 

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Hailyrain
#1
Please remember to credit the shop.
JojoTheCrookedSaint
#2
Chapter 3: Dohee and Yunhu is so sweet~ Especially the part where they are back hugging!
Dou_Nia #3
the cover will get you directly into the mood of the story
Dou_Nia #4
love it love it love it, can't wait to read the rest of it ^_^"
syamimiyana
#5
Chapter 1: keep it up! nice plot anyway ~ XD
sweetieMean #6
yeah, nice ff u have! Good luck too! /wink/
JojoTheCrookedSaint
#7
Chapter 1: I like the humor you put into your fic, keep it up !! ^^
MousyCh
#8
Chapter 1: It's a nice plot but it's really hard to read with all the dots. Try using commas and other punctuation marks and leave some space between the new sentences. It's messy but it has potential. I'd recommend you get a bit of help and everything can go well ^^