You Said Remember Me

Description

Ok, I'm not sure about this story but I'm going to try to post up the forwards first then post up the first chapter. Well I hope you enjoy this story whether you like the pairing or not.

This story is a Mystery/Romance/Drama genre. Since my other previous stories haven't had much drama in them I'll be sure to include some drama in this one. The reason why I chose the two main leads? Well, Victoria is a very pretty gal so I just chose her, and Donghae seemed to fit my image of the male lead so I chose him (I had a long debate between Donghae or Heechul). Please don't spit at my story, I really don't like to see my stories receive negative comments (as I have before and I realize even though I love comments I don't like readers spitting at my stories because of my pairings, so please be mature-thank you!)

*Note: I am just borrowing these singers' names and images to represent my characters I want to show throughout the story. I hope no one takes any offense of this story.

Foreword

“I never really thought about, never really realized until I started looking through my picture books. Now I suddenly agree that everyone around me suddenly is disappearing, dying. One by one they’re all gone now. Maybe it was a bad idea to move to Seoul, a place where I knew no one nor did I know anything. I rarely made such rash decisions, but after he died I had to go away. It wasn’t until I landed on the only picture I brought back with me from rehab did I remember him. We’d been friends and then I suddenly left.

After the argument I’d gone back to my place. I was too tired, too angry, too hurt to really think of or care about anything. I had left the living room lights off and had been sitting with only a lit candle to save some electricity that night. It wasn’t until my eyes landed on that picture did I feel my hair suddenly rise up into the air. Because the room was so dark I didn’t see his shadow hiding in the corner and when he lunged out at me I screamed.”

 

*the story is written in third person point of view, but I wrote this in first person point of view because I just found it more effective that way and it came to me that way, just so you know XD

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Characters:

Victoria Song - 24 year old psychology professor who is a very hesitant person, but would stand up for herself if needed. She has a history she's kept secret from everyone and only her aunt, who is now dead, knew of it. Losing both of her parents at a young age she is now alone in the world with only a few friends.


Lee Donghae - 25 year old newbie investigator who witnessed the murder of his parents at age 12. After finally reaching his dreams of becoming a confident crime solver he suddenly finds himself full of doubts during the case of two couples' deaths that was made out to look like suicide. He is usually a fun chirpy person who now currently stays with his uncle. 

Kim Heechul - a photographer who is Victoria's classmate from university and was rejected by her. He becomes hurt when he realizes that she does not remember him. He is willing to protect her from becoming the suspect on Chief Kang and Donghae's list and while searching for her again he finds himself falling forward blindly.

Eunhyuk - Donghae's childhood friend (the story can't go on without eunhae right?) and best friend. Eunhyuk is on a long vacation from his job and while on vacation he discovers himself in a dilemma when he discovers his sorry feelings for his step sister, when he begins to become angry about why Donghae can't answer his own questions, and when he suddenly saves Victoria from an attack.

*other characters will just be introduced in the story

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Synopsis:

Victoria returns home from the hospital and plans to move to Seoul and leave her past behind in Incheon, but before she leaves she wants to say her farewells to her two friends. However, things change abruptly when she enters their apartment to discover their dead bodies. Chief Kang and Lee Donghae are called to the scene and Victoria is interrogated non-stop that day. Donghae becomes suspicious of her when Victoria lies to him about where she'd been the day before the murder. As he tries to discover the truth about where she'd been the day before the murder he entwines himself into her personal life bringing her into his as well. 

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Dailycommenter 98 streak #1
I am trying to find an old story on here but I cannot remember the title so I am going through all the story links I found this sounds interesting and has a nice description Will read soon
wangkei #2
sounds interesting
AmberBiased23 #3
I love all ur haetoria fan fictions!!!! Their jjang!!!!!
xmixerx #4
Chapter 88: Wow :o I can't believe I spent my entire day in bed reading this! When I saw the number of chapters this has, I thought it would take me at least a few days to finish this. Guess I was wrong. This is your second full-length story that I've read. It definitely had a different writing style from Defence but after a few chapters, I quickly adjusted. I was hooked at around chapter 10. My review is not going to do this story justice, so I will end it soon. I thoroughly enjoyed it and the plot and romance were explored very well. Don't ever stop writing!
bae-jinki
#5
seems interesting
kyuraa #6
Chapter 87: i've just finishing read the whole chapter in two days..it's worth it. actually i don't really ship haetoria pair much after reading their kingdom panorama because the character is make me annoyed especially donghae. but, as i read the whole chapter i just love the way you describe their own character with the way they talk or act, so does donghae :)
you're doing a great job giving a detail to every act that the character does do that there's nothing left hanging, altough at some chapter when vic and donghae getting serious in relationship the whole story turn into more drama situation. it's good but it keep bugging me that the stalker been quiet for some time and wonder when he'll come back. as for another character like hee sun,i think it's good addition, her immature act made the story more interesting and hearbreaking. and i feel sorry for heechul, at the begining i think he'll became main character but in the end his part is getting smaller..but overall it is a very good one. i'll wait for another great story,while keep waiting on "3 ways " thank you for sharing :D
potterhaunt2
#7
nice story!
mchristina11 #8
Chapter 88: Wow this story is soooo good!!!