Abandoned

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“Daddy, take us to amusement park. Its been a whole year, please daddy.”


Luhan smiled at the little girl. He shut his laptop, and stand up fixing his crumbled dress shirt before kneeling down to lift the little girl in his arms.


He gave a smooch on her cheek which automatically made her giggle and hug his neck tighter.


“Princess, tell your mommy to get ready because we’re going now. I’ve this little desk to clean and i’ll be dowestaires.” His daughter, Hana give him a big smooch on his cheek like he did.


He put her on her feet so she can go to her mommy. Hana walked and when she reached the door, she stare at her daddy’s face who stared back with a gentle smile.


“I love you daddy.” Hana chirped than ran away giggling.





Luhan came downstairs after two minutes and smiled at his small happy family.


Jiyeon was tying Hana’s shoes while the little girl kept giggling cutely. Luhan sighed in bliss before decided to show his presence.


“Hey ladies, ready to have fun all day long?”


Jiyeon get up from her knees and smiled lovingly at her husband, and shook her head at his words.


“Mommy daddy, lets goooo!” Hana stopped the staring between the married couple and ran to her daddy who immediately lift her small frame from the floor and hugged her to his chest.


“Princess, can you go to car first? I’ll come with mommy in a minute.” The little girl nodded and when Luhan put her down, she ran outside clumsily.


“Don’t run. You’ll get hurt sweetie.” Jiyeon worriedly stare at the little girl’s back who ignored the warning. She felt a warm hands sneak beside her waist. She sighed, acting like she was annoyed at Luhan’s action but infact, she was happy.


“Thank you for everything you gave me. I couldn’t imagine my life without you or Hana. Lets live all the way happily and stay strong. Show the life that we’re one strong family.” He mumbled, buring his face on her milky neck.


Jiyeon let out a soft laugh. “I love you.”




“I love you too babe.” she pulled away when she felt the hot breath and start walking only for Luhan to intertwine their fingers together.





Like a one happy family together.

Foreword






Title: Abandoned

Genre: horror, thriller, psychology, drama

Characters: Jiyeon, Luhan, Sehun.

Length: Short story.

Warning: Umm as you see, its horror so there’s ghost, evils, death and other world.



Prologue






“Luhan, stop this... please i beg you to stop!” Jiyeon shouted as tears ran down her face. She was clutching her head tightly to substitute the throbbing pain.


Luhan throw all the stuff that was placed on coffee table. His tears flowing down too, his face show no sign of caring what his wife was saying. He was hurt so deeply to look at his wife who was hurting all the same.




“WHAT? You want me to stop?! You, out of all people should’ve known, known that she was our one and only daughter and we shouldn’t give up on her. DON’T TELL ME TO STOP NOW!!”


“Its no use... She was going to die either way... We did all we could but it wasn’t in our hands... Just stop already!” Jiyeon cried more.


Luhan let out a manic laugh. “No honey, we could’ve done better. But we DIDN’T AND NOW SHE’S DEAD! OUR DAUGHTER IS DEAD!!!” Luhan’s normally gentle voice blowing with rage in the quiet house.


He sat down, not caring the glass pieces that was cutting his flesh, the red liquid flowing down. The pain in his heart was too much.

Silence engulfed the room, only Jiyeon’s soft and low sobs could be heard. That was until Luhan said his next words.


“Its because of you... You tell her those fake bedtime fairytales, demons and evils stories. She believed those ing fake stories and wanted to be part of their world. You brainwashed my daughter... How could you...”


Jiyeon was beyond hurt. She was in shock state. He was blaming her for something that has no meaning. Every child believe those fairytales, every child wanted to be part of those stories... It was natural for kids. “I did nothing wrong. Luhan, you’re hurting me more... Please stop this... I’m hurt too...”


The disappointed look that Luhan gave her said it all before he could voice out.


“I need time... I couldn’t live with you... Let me have some space and i would come to you when my mental state is fine... I’m sorry.”



Luhan didn’t hear what she has to say, he didn’t care. He was a selfish man who didn’t handle his responsibility and left his weak wife alone, blaming her for the death of his eight years old daughter. Broke his promises that meant a lot too much for his wife. Indeed, a selfish and coward man. Running when his women actually needs him the most, deep down he know it all too well but decided to ignore that fact.



So here’s a short horror story. Well i’m writing this because i’m playing horror genre video games 'silent hill' all parts and that game is so amazing, especially the fourth part anyway. I got inspiration from movie '1408' and i wanted to write this. I know my other story is waiting to be updated so i’m really sorry about this... I really wanted to write this.


Don’t plagiarism. Its a fanfic, so nothing is reality in it and if you’re scared of things like demons and evils so please, you shouldn’t read.

Graphic shop credits: Heres To Never Growing Up Graphics

Poster designer: astroe



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jooyeon15
#1
Chapter 1: update soon :)
ybaby95
#2
Chapter 1: next chapter please :3
rizkiamut
#3
Chapter 1: Ouch why did you make Sehun as third person in Jiyeon's love story again? Poor him anyway :(
I am curious about the reason Luhan blame Jiyeon about Hana's death. Why did he mention about fairytales anyway? Wasnt the reason about Hana's death due to rare disease?
Update soon :)
Vyeon_ #4
Chapter 1: I love how the write themes was. It's not hurt on the eye's. Black with grey theme is so good than the color white.

And Omgyyy! The kiss of sehun and jiyeon is too hot. I can't hahahah

Chanyeol, baekhyun, kai and joonmyun ❤❤❤❤

Luhan is so stubborn yet rude and arrogant.
Vyeon_ #5
I can't imagine luhan acting like this. Hahahaha. Rreading the forward again xD.
Vyeon_ #6
UD SOON. SOUNDS REALLY INTERESTING KYAHH!!!
gummysmilesunhwa #7
it sounds so amazing do update soon ! :-)