Do's and Do Not's | Two

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Do's and Do Not's Two | Flashbacks, POV, Author's Note

Never start a flashback or new perspective with [Flashback] or (Character's POV) or whatever.

Don't ever do it. It's tacky and unnecessary. Have you ever read a book where the perspective changes back and forth? And have you ever seen the author write, this is Arnold's perspective, this is Ben's perspective, this is Amy's perspective? No and you will never see it. And that is why you shouldn't do it either. Remember that hard cover book I mentioned in Chapter Two? Yes, I will use it again if you add such shenanigans about {Flashback} or < Character's POV>.

A well written story will not need to point out which character has what perspective. Good authors can make the transitions between different perspectives without you ever noticing.

Now onto author's notes. It is exactly what it is called, an author's note. This means it should either be at the beginning or end of the chapter. Reading any academic paper, you will find "author's notes" within. But they are called footnotes, because wherever they are inserted, the note itself is at the bottom of the page. However, you are writing a fan fiction, not an academic paper. So if you must add that random note, add a footnote. But please avoid doing this too.

Do not add unnecessary opinions. Example: Jaymie exhaled and slowly brought her eyes up to his. "Are you sure about this?" (A/N: What are you thinking girl?! Of course he's sure! keke)

Do not be that twelve year old author who adds more author notes than actual story. Don't do it, resist the urge. Add your author notes in the beginning only if you're warning them about language, triggers, etc. Or add them at the end, this way it doesn't mess with the flow of the story.

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SkyeButterfly
#1
Found this in my subscriptions 🥺 thank you for all the tips. I’ll have to save these somewhere as they’ve been very helpful.
meowzwrites
#2
Chapter 7: Not sure if you’re still on, but I do applyfics, and I describe secondary characters briefly just in case they would like to add said characters in their apps but don’t know what to write. I do agree, however, that everytime else, let the story speak for the character.
Yasha13
#3
thanks for this
Xophias
#4
Chapter 13: This is gold! Really I hope to see more of your writing tips in the future! :)
SkyeButterfly
#5
Chapter 13: This guide has been so helpful so far! I'm definitely going to go back, pore through my stories, and edit the hell out of them. I hope you can update with more tips when you can.
jeannie_jung20
#6
Chapter 6: Ahahaha! I feel you. I have same thoughts. I've been around AFF for quite sometime and only like a handful fanfics. Some are interesting at first, but as the story progresses, it's the cliche. The only pain here is how to find a good author, in the same fandom. :)
1111086
#7
Nice! I really love this. I'm still learning how to write (since I'm not an English speaker) but I guess learning makes perfect? Thanks for your tips, anyway. It helps (and entertaining :D)!
1111086
#8
Chapter 4: Hahaha I agree with this. Changing POV is not my thing but there are some published novels (mostly teens or young adult) with changing POV too, like Eleanor and Park (or maybe it's an exception since basically it's the Author POV). I have love-hate relationship with Author Note here. I dislike adding A/N even at the end of story but I guess, at least because AFF is writing community, it helps communicating with the readers and sometimes it's fun knowing what Author thinks about their story (although adding in the middle of the story is just annoying as hell LOL).
Darthearts
#9
Chapter 4: You sure have a unique, threatening sense of humour haha :) but one thing I disagree with its the perspective thing. I think writers should be allowed to switch perspectives and tell the reader that they're switching povs. Nobody said they can't. And Jodi picoult's books do have various pov changes too. Just my 2 cents :)
treedumpling
#10
Chapter 6: This is so positive and lovely. :) i just wanted to tell you that this thread is amazing and you are doing such a wonderful job. <3