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pudding_islove #1
Chapter 118: I only vaguely remember reading the pre-vamped(?) version, but I really like how you’re taking your time to build her relationship with each person. It’s very refreshing as opposed to the insta-love thing that people do a lot. I also love how it’s very friendship first cuz I (as a reader) can see where and when and how the connection blossoms.

All in all, i great book! Story wise and character wiseπŸ’– as well as the writing itself. Can’t wait for another update soon!
staceygwen #2
Chapter 118: Personally, as a reader whom read this story even before you've revamped it, my impression of it has already been founded with all 12 of them, and imagining one of them missing because of a scandal that hasn't been proven true or due to the connection with the real world person themselves, doesn't feel right for the flow of the story itself. I consider reality and fanfiction different, much like it's name 'fiction' anyone could see the character in it not necessarily as the person implied to be, but a person of their imagination, I mean, for example, when a person wrote a fiction about a individual in a more darker tone, we the readers themselves doesn't connect to the actual person, why? It's because it's 'fiction', it's different from the real life persona. The same way, the author themselves write the character depending on their decision, the story depending on the flow they want, and etc. Does a great thriller writer be called a terrible person for depicting a person whom suffered from all kinds of accident man made or not? No, because it all goes down to the fact that there's a line in the people we see or read in fiction and those of reality. Fiction is a world where everything is possible, fantasy genre are good example of it. It can be a place where we feel the nervousness or the eerie feeling of horrors of humanity, laughing at the character stupid action/words, or falling inlove for the experience the character went through. We're free to read and write whatever we want in fiction, because all of it can be considered a release from reality, thus making it different in the mind of every people

I hope my opinion managed to contribute a bit to you. And, thanks for the chapter.
aonani_k
#3
Chapter 118: This is so random but I hope you are doing well. I really enjoyed this story (I read it the first time it came out) and came back to re-read some of the new chapters again. Take care! :)
StarlightHeaven
#4
Chapter 117: Can't wait for the next chapter authornim
LovelyLadyEm #5
Are you still alive? Hope you're doing well, I miss this story's updates ❀️
potatoface7894
#6
Asfdasghagf it's so nice hearing from u dude β™‘ We're all busy these days so don't worry, u're worth the wait! :)
Sooyong #7
Chapter 118: Well this is the place where our imagination become wild. Hahahha .. people should know to differentiate real life & fanfiction.

Plus you have done the story WAYYYYYY befkre the scandal occur.
SuhoLoverDebo
#8
Chapter 118: Hi I know I am late as I am not reading anything from past few months or more.. Not staying updated much either.. But would like to give my opinion for the poll.. See this is a story and story have multiple characters which are important.. Same here too.. If you remove a character bcz of something happened in real life it will only ruin the story plot.. People should be clear to differentiate between reel and real.. Similar situation was created for Chen too when he announced about his marriage.. Then too I said the same.. No one should mix the Story Character and A Real Life Person.. A character can have names which are associated with controversial real life people.. But do we imagine them? No.. Here too.. The name is Kris but we are free to imagine whoever we want.. I can even think about Tom Cruise or Tom Holland or even the guy next door.. It's depends on the reader.. But I don't think it's right to destroy the flow of the story bcz of this.. I hope I could explain my point properly..

Also you updated a new chapter and this actually escalated the story quickly.. I guess now is the time Alice will see the real face of them or at least get a hint.. She already saw that golden color in Jongin's eyes.. And this will be a turning point.. Will look forward to the next chapter..
curiousdaffodil
#9
Chapter 118: Can I still give an opinion?
For myself, I always separate the characters in the story from their real life characters. Even when there are pictures to show their real life characters, in my imagination, it's always different. It's weird. If I do using their face in my imagination, it's always feel like a drama. So, it still feels different.
I understand why people don't want to see the name, though. It might, intentionally or not, remind them of the real life person. Whatever your decision is up to you. I will support it. The only advice I can think of is if you do still using his name for the character, put a disclaimer in foreword so people can see the 'warning' as a caution and the reason why you still using the name (either in the foreword or separate place like a blog) so people can know your reason for that decision. There will always people who argue and protests, but there will always people who will support you too.
The point is, personally I don't mind you using his name for this story because I always separate the characters in the story from the real life person. This doesn't mean I support whatever scandal that surrounding Kris (I don't even support him or a fan of his πŸ˜…). In the end it's up to you and I will support whatever your decision regarding this. Fighting!

p.s. I thought I'd left a comment on this matter before, but I didn't find my comment here so I left this. Hopefully this will help you make a decision even a little bit. ^^
XiuminsKnuts
#10
Chapter 118: I'm also struggling with this. I am leaning toward writing him out from now on with perhaps a vague mention of somebody looking like him without naming names. I agree that because EXO is no longer 12, and due to the nature of fanfiction, that it's sometimes just a character.

Here, you have a story already established far before any of this. I don't think having him here is indicating support of him or anything, especially if you acknowledge the events. Frankly, it's up to you. I think it's sweet that you're thinking of the people who would be uncomfortable with this. In the end, he's a character based on a person. I'm sure there's DiCaprio fics out there somewhere that exist even though DiCaprio's like 95% a proven creep. You can have your version of Kris that's detached from the person. You can have him turn into an to reflect what's happening (I know he's not yet proven either way, of course, so that's a creative liberty some people may not respond well too). You can just like... make him go away haha. You're leaning toward getting rid of him, and tbh in my fics so am I. Mostly because I'm afraid of facing judgement because he's there or I just wanted to use him as a character. But a fic where he was already, based around a 2012-14 EXO? That's almost a given that Kris was there and the author and fandom had no idea about any of this.

It is my opinion as well, perhaps less popular, that it is up to the READER to decide whether or not something is an actual problem for them, and then to act accordingly. I don't believe in crucifying authors, though sometimes people should be reprimanded. I believe in leaving the author's space if a story bothers you, and you don't have to mouth off and tell them why. OR, differentiate that the character you are reading is NOT the real person, no matter how much you wish it be.

Do I want to perpetuate adoring a potential abuser? No. Do I want to condemn somebody who is innocent? Also no.

If he goes away, he goes away. If he stays, we keep in mind that this Kris is a different Kris.


Long winded, I know. But at this point it's half a debate.
mi_nam92
#11
Chapter 118: Tbh I encounter some of the writer here who have problem like this after the scandal happened. And I will say the same thing here. I have long know to differentiate between real life character and fiction character. I know the fiction character are based on the real person but to me they are two different people. But I do understand that there will be some that will be uncomfortable on this issue. So to me it is up to you on how to continue this story. I will accept it either way and it will continue reading it.
rosypeaches
#12
Chapter 118: For those who voted OT11, please don't be scared of voicing your opinions! I am very open to discussions, so don't be scared of being the odd one out 😊❀ Every opinion will be taken into account.
Sharo001
704 streak #13
Chapter 118: Take into account that technically OT12 no longer exists in that form. It’s the same for the Kris that you are writing about, he was a completely different person with the group. I have no problem with a character in OT12 that is named Kris, as he is separate from the troubled man who now exists. Hope I make sense?
aonani_k
#14
Chapter 118: I understand the dilemma honestly. On one hand, in this story he is a character separate from the real person he's named after. But on the other hand, he's a character people associate with a real person and a group dynamic that once was. So it holds much nostalgia and endearment. I understand how many could feel uncomfortable about the entire situation and wanting everyone to enjoy reading without triggers. Whatever your choice, I'll respect it because you've acknowledged the situation and you honestly care about your readers. ( I wonder if the character's story could remain without the character? What I mean is, I've seen in shows that sometimes they introduce a new character that wasn't part of the original story but falls into the storyline perfectly. Perhaps introducing another character that could have his storyline/dynamic in the group?)
noelle0719
#15
Chapter 118: I'm actually having the same dilemma about whether I not I keep him included in my stories because nothing has been disclosed yet. However, in the end it's your choice on whether you think it makes you feel at ease to do this. Personally, I was thinking it's the kris I knew back when he was in EXO and nothing more. So I hope you can decide what you think is the right decision :)
_black_kitty_
#16
Chapter 118: I don't actually mind him being in the Fic, so if you associate good memories with ot12 it's totally fine to keep this Fic an ot12 one. Like in the Fic he is just a character you are writing with your imagination and it's totally up to you how you build up his character. Not like he is portraying the same character as his personal life.
But anyway you should do what you think is best for your peace of mind!!!
PuffTedEBear
#17
Chapter 118: This may sound awful but I came into EXO after Kris, Luhan and Tao left so whenever I read anything with all 12 they are just characters. Fiction is fiction, keep your good memories.
PuffTedEBear
#18
Chapter 117: The tension is thick with this ending!! Will Alice and Jongin be okay???? I hope so!