Ah Good job author-nim!! This one makes me understand how you are when you really love a person, maybe it's a blind love which makes heart beat. And could i translate it into Vietnamese ?
Chapter 1: So this is just me, but it bothers me that you wrote Before I am blind by love. It's supossed to be Before I was blinded by love... because it's past tense. The one you use is saying, before it actually happens. (It's future tense) which is wrong. Sorry for being a Nazi Grammar. I really enjoyed this fic though. So cute, ship hunhan all the way to the moon and back.
Chapter 1: I SUPER LOVEEEEEEEEE THIS ONEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! :D
i know this one was short but ah it's super aawwwww :'''3
i like the last scene the most... hehe.. so fun to see sehun trying to coax lu like that.. and i'm wondering what sehun had said to him(?)
and u named that puppy after you? bambi? oh please.... u can do it better... hahaha loljk XD
Chapter 1: "Sorry buddy" sehun apologized one last time as he flushed the toilet !!!!! Lmaoooo haha..poor fishie
So cute and sweet , authornim . Love this a lot ♡
Chapter 1: That was so cute!
I love how we see little bits of how Sehun was in the pas, and then in the future, after he met Luhan, how he changed for the better!
Some of the scenes are cute, other romantics, some a little bittersweet, but they all balance each other well and the end made me feel very happy and fuzzy~~! <3
Thanks for this fanfic, i loved it! :D
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