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AdorableKai #1 Nov 28, 2018 17:41:46

Chapter 44: the plot is okay, but it could've been so much longer than this. you should've really delved into the angst and stretched it to the maximum. otherwise its fine, and kind of cute

kiwi157 #2 Oct 2, 2018 00:27:01

Chapter 44: yeah he just sleep with a random girl ...but sure forgive him, he was drunk ....without this this story will be cute

RinaBelle #3 Jul 22, 2018 16:09:23

Chapter 44: Aw, your story is cliche but it’s super cute and I think I fall in love with that. You gave me a reason to smile :-)

Star-of-chaos #4 Jun 2, 2018 07:48:15

Sorry, I'm sure it's a good story but I've never been able to get into second person POV.

SuhoLoverDebo #5 May 17, 2018 10:04:57

Chapter 47: Wow I loved this story..I love reading EXO mafia au.. Thanks for writing it..I finished this in one day..now off to the sequel.. And will check your other stories too.. <3

juisdesai #6 Oct 23, 2017 13:28:34

Cute story!

summertwinkle #7 Oct 9, 2017 06:26:46

Chapter 34: Just wanted to let you know, you probably don't actually mean "inserting a finger into a wet ". is oris which is really just a sensitive spot located above the uretha (where you pee). So there's no place to really insert. The opening you are referring to is the , or whatever other slang you want to use, such as . Also, you used peak as a verb but you probably meant peek.

YoonaSeungGi #8 Aug 13, 2017 13:33:03

i like it

SAAxARMY #9 Aug 3, 2017 05:35:00

Chapter 44: oh my god i loved this !!!