Chapter 1: First of all, I want to say that this is such a good and heart-throbbing fic, hehe. But I just want to utter some things. It would've been much better if the fic was a little longer than this. I mean, there were 7 days, and to get the whole feeling to the situation, describing the 7 days up to the tiny little details would be good. But then again, this is an one-shot. So, you've done the best. Good job~^^
Chapter 1: It was a wonderful fic authornim! You'd always write amazing work! I was so touched by the end of the fic. It taught me a valuable lesson too. :D Great job authornim!
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