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Jan 4, 2018 14:38:36
Chapter 1: Congratulations being on the random feature.
Jan 4, 2018 06:45:01
congratulations on the random feature!
Jan 4, 2018 00:14:13
Jan 3, 2018 22:39:39
Congrats on random feature >3<
Jan 16, 2014 08:19:00
Chapter 1: if this is the usual me, i would say "serves him right!" but since it's Bang Minsoo... ooooowaaaaahhhh come to me then!! i will take care of you and love you more then Yoomi did!! T___T this is soo gooddd!!!!
Sep 23, 2013 06:56:21
Chapter 1: howaaa~~~ Minsoo's heartbroken~! kkkkkkkk
I dont understand why you didnt use Minsoo's name from the first moment you mention him. You keep writing her crush, he, him... so it became confusing to which you refer to 'he'.
As in "they are walking side by side, crossing the school's field while talking happily as he looks at them"
who's this 'he'? kkkkk second sentence, I know it's Minsoo.
try to state names rather than pronoun, since English could be confusing, when you refer with pronouns. 'He', is it Minsoo? or Kris? or even Niel?
anywaaaayy~~~ this one is good~! ^^d