Chapter 9: The ending did NOT .
IT WAS SO BITTERSWEET ALL YOU CAN TASTE IS THE BITTER BITS BUT BEAUT NON THE LESSSSSS.
Oh my gosh.
Ohmy gosh. Oh my gosh.i honestly dont know what to say.
I like how you fleshed them out though. And christ, kai is one emo biatch on this xDDD
Chapter 9: Stop saying you writing really it is refined and we can see through this fic how it has improved!
Thank you so much for this grear TaeKai <3 you have worked well
Chapter 8: WHAT THE SHOOP, ONE MORE CHAPTER???
You bloody kiddin', right? And gull. I really like this, so full of emoshions, and just ugh, angst at rips my heart out, juggles it with dinosaur balls, then shoves it back in.
Omg.
Taeman is lovesick.
Like sosososo lovesick. Ahjumma ftw, btw.
And yeah, you should deffo add the Taekai tag on it. Def def. people are missing out, bro.
Chapter 1: oh only one chapter left...
this last flashback bit was awesome, you really have improved in writing, that was a x0391919192929 pleasure to read
also i suggest that you add the "taekai" tag to your story so that you get more people to read, kaimin is a bit less commonly known by shippers
Chapter 7: this chapter was aweeeesome really, i dont know what the phobia is but it is so beautifully written...
thank you, i am looking forward to your next chapter
Chapter 6: JEBUS, WHAT THE HECK. WHAT.
TAEMIN, WHY. WHAT HAPPENED. OMG, IM TEARING MY HAIR OFF OF AT THIS, AND WOW
YOU ACTUALLY. WROTE. A REALLY LONG. CHAPTER. WITH SO MUCH PROGRESS. WH--WH. WHA.
Chapter 6: OH MY!!!! MY HEART BROKE!! (that I'm stupid, I should not be read, while listening to a song like this </3 T____T)
WHY?! WHY TAEMIN?! WHAT HAPPENED?!!!! you two are so perfect together, and then this happens? I want them to be together ;__;
Autor-nim you are awesome!! I love you fic!! I will wait you update.
I'm so curious...
Chapter 5: T_______T why so awesome? deaaaar why so perfect? Taemin is per.fect. look at his overflowing manliness im dying
soooo looking forward the next chapter, cant believe such an awesome couple broke up i wanna know why!
Chapter 5: GEEBUS. YOU DONT KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS CHAPTER. FLUFFY CHEESE IS THE BEST.
And omfg taemin's toe, and jonghyun getting the message before everyone else makes me giggrrrruuull.
And kai's thoughts. Kai. Just. Taemin. Adorable prick.
What.
Why is he so manry here.
Apffffff-- everyone gathering at kai's and soo's place, asdhfhfflfd--
Chapter 4: I don't think I've had a chance to comment yet, but OH MY GOSH THIS STORY IS AMAZING.
Seriously, I love your writing and this story is reall interesting so far. I can't wait to read more, it's seriously killing me not knowing what happened yet. XD
So does EXO not share a dorm in this story? Kai lives on his own?
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