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silentheart
#1
Writer's block? Oh no. I hate when that happens :( You could describe her life as a student while visting her parents on the weekends(which might be a bit repetitive) I would suggest fast forwarding the story a couple of years or maybe until she graduates or something. Also since Soohyun would have already become really busy as a singer, you could have them reunite again. I can't really think of anything BIG to help move the story along. Maybe she could fall in love with one of the younger Ukiss members. I'm sorry I couldn't really help :/
MiniiPandaa
#2
Uwah so cute~~ x)
The_Silent_Reader #3
update soon!
Kitty_angel_vip #4
update Soon
MiniiPandaa
#5
Uwah~! ^^ new reader :3 cute story! Hope you update soon~~
The_Silent_Reader #6
IKR! I lost 2 chapters and they were the important ones!! Anyways update soon!
chokoreto
#7
uhhhh i remember her birthday and she got a guitar that looked like her real dad's and soohyun told her that he was gonna audition.
chokoreto
#8
LOL "nom nom nom beats ice cream any day"
OMGG AGREE:DDD
OHBTW, great story :D
The_Silent_Reader #9
Aweww cute!
Misty_the_dinosawr
#10
Please can someone mention if i have made any spelling or grammatical mistakes? Lol I hate prof reading things so I tend to not do a very good job at it. Any corrections are appreciated.
KISSmeBecca #11
Thats sad... More, pwease? :3 lol
NevertheMaknae #12
Ooooh it sounds good! Update Soon!!!