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SkyeButterfly
#1
Chapter 1: "the person who she loved the most also caused her the most pain" 💔💔💔 unfortunately, that's just reality. this was a great read. thanks for writing.
Astrae_17 #2
Chapter 1: Ahhh... so angsty! I really love this! Thank you for the awesome story! I would love to read more about what Byul does after she realized the cause of her coughing up blood....
cjmoo_ #3
Chapter 1: I really like your style of writing. I like the slow build-up here. The way you started this story piqued my interest and kept me wanting to read more to find out what's happening. That last line really packs a punch. It is a good kind of abrupt ending because it made me think through the whole story. Thanks for this!
yukifanfic #4
Chapter 1: More angst please.. Can yongsun know.. Then kill ByulE...
Angst
YouYou_4withsun
#5
Chapter 1: Short but the emotions tho-
I'm loving this, author-nim. Bonus chapter, maybe?
Lunar-Moonstar #6
Chapter 1: That was deeply poetic and painful. Great story.
Liaushio17
#7
Chapter 1: Oh wow interesting.
yukifanfic #8
Chapter 1: I love it. Would it be a bother to add few more chapters.
4dwaffle
#9
Chapter 1: At the beginning i thought it was related to hanahaki disease. I was waiting for a bunch of flower leaves. I liked this story. Can you write a few chapters too? Please