hello. i changed some things. hopefully it's not that big of a change for you to change the story for sherryl is you've written her stuff already. i just been thinking about it until i saw your notice and made some revisions. sorry and thanks!
Chapter 26: Oh how I wish that I could be that lucky to see a shooting star at 11:11 and have my wish automatically come true! hahahahaha I love how this turned out. I honestly didn't expect Jisoo's arc to be the next one and I'm already trying to guess who's next!
Chapter 26: I saw the notification on my phone about this story being updated this morning(in my country) but I wasn't able to read it since I had to get to school cause I woke up late hahaha. But thankfully I was able to read it during our break time and I must say I didn't expect it to be another applicant's mini-arc. I was very surprised but at the same time I liked it since it allows everyone to take a look at the different mini-arcs of each character while not having to wait for one to finish.
Chapter 26: Oh yass!! Jisoo's arc woooh! I love how her introvertedness was somewhat the focus of this part since I have a feeling it will play a big part in her development in the coming chapters. I really like this chapter and how she was introduced! Nice work!
Chapter 25: Can I just first say that I loved these chapters??? They’re great! And also, so sorry I haven’t been commenting lately! Anyways, I think you portrayed Kyungeun just fine :) I’m super excited for the rest of the mini arcs, and the main arc is just so compelling! Great job!!
Chapter 24: I am so hyped for the next chapter! Wait, wats a mini-arc? Is it like the story of those who applied? Cause I feel like the main arcs are the ones which involve Serena and Xukun
Chapter 23: Pim's situation is something we always watched in drama. I feel sorry for her.
But it is true that fate is something that is hard to alter...
Chapter 23: She tried winning him over naturally though. Effort points for her! These are some really good backstories since they put a lot of depth to the possibilities of a single wish.
Chapter 23: This chapter was really good! It gives more depth onto the types of wishes people make and how Serena could actually help out those who don't want their wish anymore. The backstories are really cool and informational and I think they are really necessary for us to understand the story better.
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