Comments: Of Money and Men

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allyas #1
hyeee, i cant wait for this story to finish so i can hinge-read it eheee >~< you’re doing a great and amazing job! goodluck studying!
allyas #2
hyeee, i cant wait for this story to finish so i can hinge-read it eheee >~< you’re doing a great and amazing job! goodluck studying!
blodynyx #3
Chapter 6: This story intrigue me. So far, you have write it in the right pace, it's neither fast nor slow. The way you wrote that stalking scene and the closing made me excited. Jiah is clever and kind of like have spidey sense until the closing happened. It was, sis???? Your hardwork of getting away from one man is in vain just because you let your guard down. But that's okay, she'll eventually come to the HQ, it's just a matter of time and this time it was way too fast haha

p.s. I found some typos but that's really minor.
19Taylor97 #4
Chapter 6: I really like this so far, hope to see more from you soon.
MissMong24 #5
Chapter 6: I am in love with your writing style!
XxhotlishxX #6
Chapter 6: An amazing start...
Lucindaes #7
Chapter 5: Seems promising! Hope to read more in the future!
lilyexobts #8
Chapter 5: I am looking forward for this one!! I feel like this one is going to be a super interesting story! Thumbs up
pimp_daddy #9
Chapter 5: Seems promising, can't wait for more!
NoraMyFics #10
Chapter 5: this is a good start!!! looking forward to it!!
921127_930309 #11
Chapter 5: Lina, first of all, you have got me H O O K E D. I am a huge fan of gang/crime stories and the lurking darkness this snippet presented made me want to read more. Can't wait for more in the future!! Good luck girl!!!!!
ShanaWerble #12
Chapter 5: Wow that long forgotten memories got me curious.
ShanaWerble #13
Chapter 5: Wow that long forgotten memories got me curious.
Suga0Bear #14
Chapter 5: So excited to see how this develops! Keep up the good work ;))
Liajiya #15
Chapter 3: This seems interesting, I’ll keep an eye for the upcoming chapters :)))
Jhtylee #16
Chapter 3: I really like the story, plz continue to update when you have time.
chimchimintomyheart #17
Chapter 3: i'm already hooked! how frequently do you update? can't wait to read more :)
Mearychan #18
Chapter 2: Its really interesting!!! And I really like your writing style :)
Alosya #19
Actually this story line is intresting
ikran12 #20
Chapter 1: The story is great ? continue