Chapter 10: Okay, I quite liked how this ended, and I loved how Dongho transformed Yeri's thinking from a callused, untrusting being, to a confident woman who could decide her own destiny, in the end. And I loved HIS attitude throughout the story, never showing any resentment to any of them, even if they may have deserved it. Thank you for writing this and giving such a great interpretation of the prompt. I loved it♡.
Chapter 6: I love how you've described the under-water world and the reasons behind it. It's fascinating! And it's really sad that they have to live that way, but maybe someday things will change, if they survive long enough.
Chapter 4: I feel bad for them both, since it seems that Yeri is stuck in a position she doesn't want to be in, and Dongho, for the obvious reasons. At least she told the truth and didn't lie, even if she fears humans.
Chapter 1: First of all, I'm glad I'm finally here and reading lol. It's nice=).
Dongho is a curious, adventurous guy, isn't it? I can imagine that it would be fun to dive like that and explore. But now I'm worried about him! Yikes...
Chapter 10: My goodness, I admit that I kind of lost hope even after Yeri found him. I just... am relieved that they survived (for now), and I do worry a little about their futures, but I'm sure that some of them might make it (hopefully) T-T
Chapter 8: First, I loved seeing Yeri's internal conflict intensifying as she started to unravel her own opinions after being exposed to a real human, but then I knew Sungryung wasn't going to be too happy with this... AND NOW I DON'T THINK I'LL SLEEP FOR THREE YEARS OMGOMGOMG
Chapter 6: Okay, I admittedly love this chapter because it provides a look into the People from another perspective. It just... things like this are complicated, and there may not be any one solution, but the danger is very real here. I just didn't think it would only be a few weeks!
Chapter 5: I get that Dongho has an advantage with their secret and Yeri realizes that as well, but I just feel like Dongho wouldn't really use it against her like that? Maybe unless it was a REALLY desperate move ._.
Chapter 4: Seeing the crack in Yeri when Dongho protected her was pretty heartwarming, I have to say, and I'm glad she told the truth, but that last bit?? OMG WHAT
Chapter 2: This chapter is such a cool one to follow the first. Yeri's anger and the conflict that she and the others of her kind are faced with make me see how it is to their eyes, though I try to follow the path of peace, I get that she may be misguided?...
Chapter 1: Okay, that was a pretty interesting opening. I really liked how it introduced his character in something that he enjoyed but was pretty normal... until things took a turn for the stranger O_O
Chapter 10: That was an interesting ending! Open, but with room for interpretation...
I hope everyone survived, but I know the chances of that.
In my perfect ending, Yeri gets Baekho to safety, with the help of Aron the fisherman (I don't know why I can see him as a fisherman) who promptly calls his brother, JR, to tell him his diving buddy was found. JR rushes to Aron's home, along with Minhyun, Baekho's best friend. Meanwhile, they call Ren, who's a doctor, to assess Baekho's condition, and they work together to find Yeri's people to help them or prevent them from doing any harm.
Then happy ending with families & marriages & fluff!
Chapter 10: Sooo he did survive! Who thinks that Yeri Will lowkey "run away" with him raise your hand! o/ lol
I think this was a Nice ending. In a way, I do think that it's not for us to know what happened next, Just what happened until then. X3
Chapter 9: AGH WHAT, I THOUGHT THEY HAD WEEKS?! The dome is breaking ene I hope they make it out and that everything ends well.. though it might not and the story would still be good. Eh. :D
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