Chapter 1: Hello! I just finished re-reading this and yes oh my god this still makes butterflies flutter their wings rudely in my stomach. It's still one of the cutest things too <3
The others are so funny too, although poor my Jongdae his balls must be frozen already ugh
And when you broke the fourth wall, you did it very nicely!
I still hope that this will develop into a longer series but that, of course, is only my suggestion. Thank you for writing this!
Chapter 1: Aaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww that was soooo cuteeee and fluffyyyyy (see what I did there: cute and fluffy, get it? Kekeke).
It's a cute and fluffy one-shot, if it was a series I would have suggested adding some drama in it too, like them getting jealous or something. However, since it's a one-shot, it's supposed to be short and it was very nice and well-written.
I enjoyed the teasing fluffiness of it all!!! For a first try at fluffiness, you passed with flying colors!!
Looking forward to more fluffy stories! ^~^
Chapter 1: A couple of spell checks here and there (like I think you meant courtesy instead of curtsy). Otherwise this was so cute! And Junmyeon being outright honest about the Sebooty!
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