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omgsunnie
#1
Chapter 7: When was the last time I left comment? September oh my god why am I so lousy and inconsistent! ;;; ashdkdjdhxjsksjs jimin and dason have this spark they just have to figure it out soon!!! But it is great to have mark in the picture. He is going to be the one who trigger that spark of jealousy which may lead to honesty.
_maknaetrash #2
Chapter 7: I'm so happy for your updates ! It's very frustrating to see jimin and dasom like this. The tension is no joke..
Bambina_hae
#3
Chapter 5: OMG, i'm in love with the story. can't wait for the next chapter^^
Fighting :))))
wonderdream #4
Chapter 2: I absolutely love this story. It starts off well and the speed is nice. Thanks for making this story:)
wonderdream #5
Im looking forward to read this story. It sounds interesting;)
asianunknown
#6
Chapter 5: I like the pace of the fic - not rushed at all and takes its time to develop. One another note, BTS's comeback is 4 days from now, I'm already resurrected after the death of the comeback trailer!
omgsunnie
#7
Chapter 4: I thought mark was a one time thingm I guess he is slowly going to be in between of dasom's feeling and jimin's confusion. Whether he seese her as a friend or more than it. Gosh thank you for the update and welcome back ;)))))))))
Taemins_tetris_lips
#8
Chapter 3: i really like your story! i always have a hard time finding fanfictions with concepts that i enjoy so im very happy to have found yours! thank you and im excited to read more ^^
_maknaetrash #9
Chapter 3: I love this story ! Pls don't be discourage and keep going. You're roing really well ;)
vanessanicolaa #10
Chapter 3: i'm liking the fanfic more and more. please update as soon as possible!

PS: i understand the struggle, girl! i dunno why ideas always seem to pop out in the middle of the night. now, my dark circles are as dark as a panda's. anyway, fighting!
Christofur
#11
Chapter 3: I really enjoy the pacing so I think your doing a great job. Looking forward to how the story will turn out
omgsunnie
#12
Chapter 2: I understood you ;;;; it is not easy to express a character in depth like you really have to dive deep inside and blend with the character :/
But you did a good job in expressing dasom you know it was a super deep talk sometimes ppl usually skip it.but the relevancy of her conversation with jimin gote continue reading.
It tangles with life so it is relatable that way.
Deep talk aint fun but since you make it sound real, I think that is all matter.
omgsunnie
#13
Chapter 1: Okay to compare with the previous one, this one is much better :)
It is true the first one that you wrote, you kinda beat around the bush,but this one is surprisingly way too good. <3
The filler is enough to trigger my curiosity~~ dont worry it is well written really.
asianunknown
#14
Chapter 2: I guess I kind of understand Jimin. Although I haven't experienced falling in love, from what I see, love can seem a bit monotonous and temporary. But people should motivate themselves to do better in their relationships, go see how they can spice up a bit. :DD
LLtophyun
#15
I came from The Value of Us and can i just say that I'm so excited for you new fanfic :)

FIGHTING!!!
Yoong10
#16
I came here from The Value of Us