guess what? :) I DIDN'T DIE! Because this part ain't boring AT ALL. <3333 I love it! I love how she likes Onew but doesn't realize it yet. It's so sweet~ and how Onew ran in the rain just to go to her...sigh. >_< Oh, Onew~~ I love the ending too! Plus, the I love you, I love you, I love you part totally made me squeal and made my heart go into frenzy mode. Lol <333 I love it! Goodluck in this piece of yours, dongsaeng. i just know you'll bag that prize! ;)
I like your style of writing, to me it wasn't boring at all! Haha i love how you snuck in all the SHINee members' personalities and quirks. If you get really bored with this fic, try and add some random event that makes you laugh, or smile. Hopefully you finish this before the deadline! Great job, by the way. :)
What the heck are you talking about? It wasn't boring at all! To be honest, you had my imagination working. I can so picture in my head hyoyeon being emotionless and my five shinee babies in commoner clothes, being thieves. It is so nice! <3 not many fics can make my images like that in my head, you know. :)) i love how hyo doesn't have any emotion and how onew seems to be bursting with it--worry, concern, shyness, happiness, relief, love...it's a beautiful contrast! I wonder what will happen once they discover WHO the real princess is. I hope you'll find inspiration soon, baby girl!<br />
Update soon! This was definitely worth the wait! :D
Wow!You updated!!!^^*happy dance*<br />
It wasn't boring at all!<br />
It was amazing!^^<br />
Anyway I hope you'll be able to make it to the deadline!!!^^<br />
Update soon~^^
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