Chapter 1: (Chapt. 1) Since Jungkook himself is a visual artist who draws and paints, it seems very out of character for him to have so little sympathy toward a sibling who is also an artist. Of course any RP fanfic is going to be slightly different from the real life person, but it’s the real life person who draws most readers in. At this point in the story, Jungkook comes across as insensitive and unkind, which is a very big, hard to believe difference from the real world person
Chapter 5: I think this is unfair to Jungyeon, y is she taking all the blame. Jungkook was also wrong.
N even if there was wrong between the sibling, I think Jungkook went too far with hurting her and all.
He even stopped her from doing what she likes, without any explanation. This is all unfair at her part.
I m happy that they are back to normal. It would have been better if this story ended with bit more explanation.
Chapter 5: I think it is unfair for Jungyeon to take all the blame. Jungkook shouldn't have acted that way from the very beginning. Him stopping Jungyeon from her dreams is unacceptable. I am not really resolved with how the story ended. Yes, they were able to rebuild their relationship, but it is very unjust for Jungyeon.
Chapter 3: It was good but i feel like Jungyeon's character could have been understood better by going through her struggles of being deprived of things she wanted to do. It could have been nice to have some of the blame being placed on Jungkook to instead of just Jungyeon
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