Chapter 17: Thanks for the update.. I don't recall reading any of this so I guess this chapter is totally new.. I remember her reconcile with Yubin soon or like they never had any problem in old version and Yubin helped her with her power.. Taught her how to use it.. But here they have a fall out and Hyesun finding out her all dark secrets.. This is actually better I think bcz I felt a little off for this part in old one..
Chapter 16: Sad for yeri to leave her brother and jungkook.And now jeahyun is her mate,I think I remember her being mate with sehun in old story if I am not mistaken,if so now it will interesting to find out more abt new version and story.
Chapter 16: Thanks for the update.. This chapter highly contrast with that chapter in Forever where Yeri talked to Daisy.. This is her struggle which no one know or understand.. She is a no one.. At the mercy of the people she don't know.. She has dream and ambition which depends on if she lives or not.. Her life and future both are uncertain.. She walked forward without knowing what will be the outcome.. And we know how she emerge from this as a winner.. Can't wait for the next chapter..
Chapter 13: Hi do you remember me? I left AFF for over a year bcz I needed a break.. Now recently I came back and saw an update.. I still remember the OG story so I am really enjoying this revamped one.. Hope you guys are fine and healthy..
Now will head over to the sequel to catch up with all the updates..
Chapter 13: Old reader here ❤️I love coming back to this story ( and not just because my favourite surene otp has more “screentime” in the re-written version😅) I love the detailed and more developed conversations/ relationship/ descriptions. Keep up doing great work, I’ll definitely stay for more 💜
Chapter 12: If you really look at it, Yeri did say she doesn't have the mental space to think about their relationship, so like her brain would be focused more on food? I mean mine would.
Anyways, I can't wait to see Seulgi go from this to protective mother hen, cause we it's going to happen. Is Ren is new character? I'm not sure if I remember him from the first version.
Yeri's father is a class A jerk and her brother isn't to far behind. At least Jungkook is still trying, even though he knows it won't lead to much.
Also I'm glad Jaehyun and her actually talked about their relationship cause I know it didn't happen the first time. (Is it bad I keep comparing the two versions?) I don't mean to, it's just nice to get a better understanding of their relationship.
Chapter 11: Honestly, I did think it was very unlikely for you to comeback as I assumed work must have taken quite a toll on your life and you just couldn't spend time on here as you did before, especially considering you weren't feeling well, the last time you updated.
I don't remember exactly how things went about the first time, other than Hyesun being kidnapped by the witches.
Alpha Chanyeol is a freaking jerk. He's so rude and egoistic for no good reason.
Atleast Hyesun has common sense to run and her best friend makes me roll my eyes.
Again, it still seems unfair that their pack would be blamed for someone else's actions. Just why???
I can't wait for the next update!!! Thank you for this one.
Chapter 4: I truly like all the adjustments you have made so far. The details you put in it made it very fulfilling (for a lack of better word) and made it all seems more concrete compared to before. Looking forward to see what else you will add to the story :)
Chapter 9: Thanks for the update.. I had to read this chapter.. To understand that chapter in Forever where Yeri was guiding that girl.. All the emotions she felt which turning.. Her thoughts and reasons for her decision.. She definitely didn't do any mistake for choosing this life.. She made history and became a role model.. And Jaehyun.. God so many emotions... This guy Ren Orihara.. If am not wrong then he was mentioned in Forever right? As one of the oldest vampire or something? I can't remember correctly though..
Chapter 8: Usually, I don’t like vulnerable characters because they remind me that there are weakness in people and I’d like to believe that I’m above them. But I liked the scene where Hyesun was talking with her therapist! I wonder what makes her feel so insecure, and who Ms. Bang and Yoora are. I hope that Hyesun won’t be treated like a weak little thing when she’s introduced to the pack and I hope she gets her powers or witchy senses soon. I feel like that’s what connects her to Lamia, or the woman in her dream.
Is the therapist part of the pack? Is she going to tell Baekhyun about Hyseun’s insecurities? I feel like I remember something like this in the old version? Or did I mix it with a different story? Hehehe, can’t remember!
I’m excited to read more!
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