Review from Strawmeery's Graphics,Advertisement and Review Shop (Goodbye, Lee Taemin)
GOODBYE,LEE TAEMIN
FIEFAPALOOZA
GENRE: ROMANCE,ANGST,DRAMA
CHARACTERS: LEE TAEMIN,OC
RATING: (RATED OR NOT)
LENGTH: CHAPTERED(21 AT THE MOMENT)
STORY TITLE (10/10)
"GOODBYE" A VERY POPULAR TITLE IN THE ANGST WORLD,VERY COMMON YET IT NEVER FAILS TO SNATCH THE ATTENTION OF THE READERS. CAUSE THERE'S ALWAYS SOMETHING IN GOODBYE,IT'S SUCH A POWERFUL WORD DON'T YOU THINK? WHEN I READ YOUR TITLE,A LOT OF IDEAS HAS COME TO MY MIND AND IT GAVE SOME HINTS UNTO THE STORY.
FOREWORD AND DESCRIPTION (20/20)
I LIKE THAT!I LIKE THAT A LOT!YOUR STORY'S FOREWORD AND DESCRIPTION IS REALLY CATCHY AND IT JUST GRABBED MY ATTENTION,SERIOUSLY.CAUSE I LOVE ANGST SO MUCH,I LOVE STORIES WITH BETRAYAL,REJECTION,CHEATING,YOU KNOW THINGS LIKE THAT(I'M A SADIST DON'T JUDGE ME XD) ANYWAYS,IT'S LIKE ALL EMOTIONS ARE THERE IN THE DESCRIPTION AND YOU CAN INSTANTLY FEEL IT,YOU CAN FEEL THE BETRAYAL AND YOU CAN FEEL THE SADNESS.
PLOTLINE (30/30)
WHAT MORE CAN I SAY THOUGH?YOUR PLOTLINE IS REALLY AMAZING.COMMON,YES BUT IT'S NOT TIRESOME,IT'S NOT SOMETHING THAT YOU'LL GET TIRED OF READING EVEN IF YOU HAVE READ A LOT OF SIMILAR PLOTLINE.I CAN'T HELP TO REALLY GET INTO THE STORY,LIKE,I'M READING IT AND I'M IMAGINING THAT I'M THE GIRL,I'M THE ONE WHO'S WRITING THOSE DIARY ENTRIES AND SUCH.
CHARACTERIZATION (10/10)
I LOVE THE ROLES OF EACH CHARACTER AND I DEFINITELY LOVE ADREANNE'S CHARACTER.HANDS DOWN TO HER FOR BEING ABLE TO STAY FOR A LONG TIME EVEN WHEN TAEMIN HAS LIED INFRONT OF HER FACE AND STILL MANAGED TO PULL IT TOGETHER.
READABILITY (30/30)
WHAT'S READABILITY?!JUST READ IT DAMN IT!LOL! IT'S ACTUALLY THE FIRST TIME I'VE EVER READ A STORY THAT'S NOT EXO,GOT7 OR BTS.I'VE NEVER GONE OUT THAT CATEGORY AND FOR A FIRST,WELL I AM IMPRESSED.NOT BAD.
OVERALL (100/100)
A PERFECT SCORE FOR YOU MY DEAR! YOU'RE STORY IS AWESOMELY AMAZING AND I WOULD LOVE TO READ ON.I ACTUALLY SUBSCRIBED SO I CAN KEEP ON TRACK ON YOUR UPDATES CAUSE I REALLY LIKED IT!TAEMIN IS SO DUMB I WANNA KILL HIM(LOL NOT REALLY).I MADE A POSTER FOR YOU SINCE YOU DON'T HAVE ONE.UP TO YOU IF YOU'RE GONNA USE IT :) JUST CLICK ON THE POSTER FOR THE LINK :)
PROS. YOUR WRITING STYLE THAT MAKES THE STORY LESS COMLICATED,BECAUSE THERE ARE SOME STORIES THAT HAS A LOT OF POV'S AND SOMETIMES IT'S IRRITATING.NOT LIKE YOU,IT ONLY SHIFTS WHEN IT HAS TO.
CONS. IS THERE ANY?
CHARACTERS: LEE TAEMIN,OC
RATING: (RATED OR NOT)
LENGTH: CHAPTERED(21 AT THE MOMENT)
STORY TITLE (10/10)
"GOODBYE" A VERY POPULAR TITLE IN THE ANGST WORLD,VERY COMMON YET IT NEVER FAILS TO SNATCH THE ATTENTION OF THE READERS. CAUSE THERE'S ALWAYS SOMETHING IN GOODBYE,IT'S SUCH A POWERFUL WORD DON'T YOU THINK? WHEN I READ YOUR TITLE,A LOT OF IDEAS HAS COME TO MY MIND AND IT GAVE SOME HINTS UNTO THE STORY.
FOREWORD AND DESCRIPTION (20/20)
I LIKE THAT!I LIKE THAT A LOT!YOUR STORY'S FOREWORD AND DESCRIPTION IS REALLY CATCHY AND IT JUST GRABBED MY ATTENTION,SERIOUSLY.CAUSE I LOVE ANGST SO MUCH,I LOVE STORIES WITH BETRAYAL,REJECTION,CHEATING,YOU KNOW THINGS LIKE THAT(I'M A SADIST DON'T JUDGE ME XD) ANYWAYS,IT'S LIKE ALL EMOTIONS ARE THERE IN THE DESCRIPTION AND YOU CAN INSTANTLY FEEL IT,YOU CAN FEEL THE BETRAYAL AND YOU CAN FEEL THE SADNESS.
PLOTLINE (30/30)
WHAT MORE CAN I SAY THOUGH?YOUR PLOTLINE IS REALLY AMAZING.COMMON,YES BUT IT'S NOT TIRESOME,IT'S NOT SOMETHING THAT YOU'LL GET TIRED OF READING EVEN IF YOU HAVE READ A LOT OF SIMILAR PLOTLINE.I CAN'T HELP TO REALLY GET INTO THE STORY,LIKE,I'M READING IT AND I'M IMAGINING THAT I'M THE GIRL,I'M THE ONE WHO'S WRITING THOSE DIARY ENTRIES AND SUCH.
CHARACTERIZATION (10/10)
I LOVE THE ROLES OF EACH CHARACTER AND I DEFINITELY LOVE ADREANNE'S CHARACTER.HANDS DOWN TO HER FOR BEING ABLE TO STAY FOR A LONG TIME EVEN WHEN TAEMIN HAS LIED INFRONT OF HER FACE AND STILL MANAGED TO PULL IT TOGETHER.
READABILITY (30/30)
WHAT'S READABILITY?!JUST READ IT DAMN IT!LOL! IT'S ACTUALLY THE FIRST TIME I'VE EVER READ A STORY THAT'S NOT EXO,GOT7 OR BTS.I'VE NEVER GONE OUT THAT CATEGORY AND FOR A FIRST,WELL I AM IMPRESSED.NOT BAD.
OVERALL (100/100)
A PERFECT SCORE FOR YOU MY DEAR! YOU'RE STORY IS AWESOMELY AMAZING AND I WOULD LOVE TO READ ON.I ACTUALLY SUBSCRIBED SO I CAN KEEP ON TRACK ON YOUR UPDATES CAUSE I REALLY LIKED IT!TAEMIN IS SO DUMB I WANNA KILL HIM(LOL NOT REALLY).I MADE A POSTER FOR YOU SINCE YOU DON'T HAVE ONE.UP TO YOU IF YOU'RE GONNA USE IT :) JUST CLICK ON THE POSTER FOR THE LINK :)
PROS. YOUR WRITING STYLE THAT MAKES THE STORY LESS COMLICATED,BECAUSE THERE ARE SOME STORIES THAT HAS A LOT OF POV'S AND SOMETIMES IT'S IRRITATING.NOT LIKE YOU,IT ONLY SHIFTS WHEN IT HAS TO.
CONS. IS THERE ANY?
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