tell me what you think?? plz?

Most people lıke their coffee sweet and hot, with milk or double cream, but I like my coffee bitter and cold, with no added cream or milk. Just plain black coffee.

 

People usually drink coffee because it relaxes them and clears their minds, but I drink it because it brings back reality, the bitterness of black coffee reminds me of the bitterness of reality. When I drink it, I can't think of anything else but its taste on my tongue, the cool liquid sliding sliding sown my throat.

 

It's like alcohol; addictive.

 

People think coffee is soothing, but it screams miserable to me- it's tragic. It has been through a lot- it has been picked, dried, roasted, cooled, grind boiled, iced- it is not something easily achieved.

 

 

He was like black coffee, just the way I love. He was cold, he was miserable, he was bitter. I wanted feel every inch of him, savor the taste of his lips, the darkness in his eyes, the coldness in his voice, the sadness in his smile, the pungent smell of his cologne, the hurt in his words. Not easily achieved, just like black coffee. And that bitterness is what drew me in.


 

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Berry-tan #1
wow! Awesome! \(n_n)/
Bassie
#2
I edited it since I was bored and didn't have to do anything else; I hope you don't mind.

Most people desire their coffee sweet and hot, with milk or double cream. Though, I savor my coffee only when bitter and cold, without any cream and without milk; just plain, black coffee.

People drink coffee because it makes them relaxed and it clears their mind, but I drink it because it brings back reality and makes me forget about every single problem. When I drink it, I can't think of anything else but its taste on my tongue, the cool liquid sliding down my throat.

It's like alcohol, addictive.

People know coffee as something calm, but it screams miserable to me; it is tragic. It has been through a lot—pick, dry, roast, cool, grind, boil, freeze—and I think that's what makes it different and special. It's not something easily achieved.

He was like black coffee, just the way I love. He was cold, he was miserable, and he was bitter. I wanted to feel every inch of him, savor the taste of his lips, the darkness in his eyes, the coldness in his voice, the sadness in his smile, the pungent smell of his cologne, the hurt in his words.
michelle_daragon
#3
ooohh!! Cool! Nice!!!
SkyDragonINF
#4
i love that! love the description.
angel-elfe-superj
#5
Oh my god. T^T I love it ! ~ Are you gonna make a fic out of it ? If so, I wanna read it ! *^*
And I'm not really sure but I think you made a mistake : "It has been though a lot", isn't it supposed to be "through" instead of "though" ?
Katy13
#6
i'm so new to writing T^T