So I am trying to write a story...but it's a fail. Idk but I mean I just have a feeling that the story I am writing sounds like crap. I wanted to write a fic because AFF is my safe haven. It's where I can do what I want and be myself. I use most if my free time on AFF, even though I have one busy schedule. It's hard trying to juggle sports, school, and your daily life. With all the stories I read, I totally forget the realities and just start to daydream. 

So if you don't mind, would you please read my story, it would really mean a lot for you to just read it. It would be very helpful if you give any feedback/critic to my story.