Heaven is for...: review

Title: (8/10)

Appearance: (5/10) background?

Description and Foreword: (12/15)

Originality: (7/10)

Flow: (8/10)

Grammar, Spelling and Punctuation: (19/20)
 

Characterization: (8/10)

Writing: (7/10) It should have spaces between every line, I always get confused since you can't highlight it.

Bonus: (2/5)

Total: (76/100)