Should I make this into a story or not?! K.O. 3an Guo

This is the drama I am basing this story on:K.O. 3an Guo.If you like my idea please do tell me.I want to know if I should make this into a story or not...

-black_haze


Han Dynasty has ended

Yellow Rebellion Days have begun

The Times are glorious.

All is peaceful......

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(From DramaWiki!the parts in blue have been added by me..) After getting kicked out of their 24th school for starting fights and couldn't find another school that would accept them, Guan Yu and Zhang Fei thought it's a God send the Liu Bei propsed to be their sworn brothers so they can enroll into the prestigious Dong Han Shu Yuan,a school exclusively for royalty,on the condition that they pay his tuition.But Guan Yu's younger adopted sister has a feeling he is up to no good and keeps an eye on him,following them into the school.Though they enrolled,it didn't mean they attended the class in peace because they must survive the school's death traps and hostile invasion from warring schools.

Mei Xing

She is the younger sister of Guan Yu.She is just like her older brother.Loyal,righteous and straight-headed.Though she is not like him at times.Her brother tends to be VERY serious.While she is well.....not so much.She is very hyper and at most random at all times.

She treats Guan Yu's best friend, Zhang Fei, like an older brother since they grew up together. They are both very overprotective of her.When they were younger,you would never see the three seperated from each other.

One thing she does know and slightly dislikes is how Guan Yu is not blood related to her but they act so alike.She was adopted in his family when she was very young,she can't remember that because,well she was a baby!.Her real family though,didn't attend to give her up and have been looking for her over the years.They run a very very successful gang or its proper term Mafia.So it turns out she has money that she never even knew about.Though its not like when they find her she would go back to them,she is just gonna stay with her brother and thats that.

Mei Xing's weapon is the Canglong gong renyuan de or Black Dragon Bowstaff.This bowstaff is very unique because it can become twin dual blades.The power is unlimated so she only uses it when needed.She likes to fight with her barehands more than when she fights with weapons.

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     I walk behind Zhang Fei and Guan Yu as Zhang Fei talks about us getting kicked out of our 23rd school.Hey its not my fault that jerk was ing on me!He deseverd that beating anyways.I smirk chuclking at the memory. "Hey stop thinking about that fight!" says my older brother smacking the back of my head.We arrive at the school and my mouth drops.Is that?! "Hey why do they need so many doors?" asks Zhang Fei Guan Yu says "Could it be?...the best battle formation...."I finish his sentance "Ba Men Jin Suo Zhen...The Golden Locks of Eight Gates Formation..."We walk around the men who are as i call it sleeping..Hehe. Ah you must be confused! Ba Men Jin Suo Zhen or The Golden Locks of Eight Gates Formation,according to the country's martial arts records.The Golden Locks of Eight Gates formation was designed by Zuo Chi from a noble family of magic.This formation is ranked first as the best battle formation.The eight doors represent The Gate of Cultivation,The Gate of Life,The Gate of Pain,The Gate of Restriction,The Gate of Circumstances,The Gate of Death,The Gate of Fear and The Gate of Beginnings.There is a surprise behind each door!I hope you are caught up now.We walk up closer to the gates Guan Yu says "I never expected to counter the Golden Locks of Eight Gates formation.Master Zuo Chi planned the formation for fifty years," He turns to Zhang Fei and I "no has ever broken it." I look at the eight gates closely my eyes widening.The side of my mouth twitches up..These gates are FAKE! I turn to tell the guys but Zhang Fei cuts me off "The more people that have failed,the more I want to try"

     I smile lightly at the thought.I would love to try the REAL Gates.Guan Yu looks at us sternly and says "We're here to study,not to break the formation." Zhang Fei nods they looks up yelling "Wei!people inside,weire here to study!Can you move away The Golden Locks of Eight Gates Formation and let us enter?!" Three nerdy guys slowly show up at the top of the wall.The one in the middle starts to speak "Who knows whether or not you two are from Huang Jin High and are here to seize the school." Zhang Fei starts to get mad "Wei!" Guan Yu says "Huang Jin High School has become more and more arrogant these days." Zhang Fei huffs "I agree.After seizing the school,they grab whatever is there.Like teaching tools,registration fees,nutritious meals.Ey,I heard rumours about a particular school;the underwear of all male and female teachers,even the principal,were taken off and snatched away." I look at him shocked "Is that true?" He says "Of course it's not true." Guan Yu huffs and says "Your lame" and turns back to the nerds.Zhang Fei continues talking "I heard that studying in Huang Jin High school,all fees accept school fees are free.Not only that,students can get scholarships every month no matter their grades.But the only condition is that they must join them to seize other schools.People call the students there Huang Jin Zei" Yellow Kerchief Thieves...Hmmm..I look at Guan Yu as he says "The schools have become like this all because of the School Independance Law." Zhang Fei asks "What's the school independance law?" Guan Yu looks foward "It's from when they were trying to lift learning standards and faked the introduction of the Freedom Law"

        I speak up "Xiao Yan Zi Zhi Fa or School Independance Law is a false order of introducing the Freedom Law.All the politician,police and army cadets will be taken out of the school compound.The education department will be disbanded.Police and army cadets are not allowed to go within 100 meters of campuses"The two of them look at me as I finish talking.Zhang Fei says "No wonder there's no police outside the school." He turns back to the three nerds slightly scaring them "Wei!We're here to protect the school." Me and Guan Yu nod.The nerd in the middle says "Protect the school?Protect yourselves first,Little " He laughs with his friends.I kick up a stone ready to throw it as Zhang Fei slightly bursts in anger Guan Yu stops us "Lao Zhang,Mei Xing don't get angryStop getting aggravted everytime someone calls you Little ,alright?!" I drop the stone turning my head away Zhang Fei says "I'll listen to you this once.If he says it again,I'll destroy the whole school!" Guan Yu says "Calm down a bit.You know very well what will happen when you get angry." I remember when we were young Guan Yu tried to get Lao Zhang to calm down bet he kept yelling that he was getting angry,then flames came out of his mouth as his face turns completely black.I chuckle at the memory.Guan Yu looks at him in shock "After your face turning black,you don't remember what happened?" Lao Zhang nods "That's right.I don't remember.Was I very strong?" I slightly fall down as he says that.

   Guan Yu laughs at him then turns back to the nerds "Wei!People inside,listen carefully!My surname is Guan,name is Yu and Zi is Yun Chang." I slightly giggle at the last part He points to Fei "His surname is Zhang name is Fei and Zi is Yi De and this is my younger sister Mei Xing.We just transferred here today.We already have the letter of admission" The nerd in the middle says "Nowadays there are even fake s;what's so difficult about forging a letter of admission?" Fei yells at them "My chest is real" Yu looks at him "That's not the point" "Its real!" Fei insists.I sahke my head "I   agree.Anything can be fake." says someone behind us.We look back seeing a guy walk up to us "I think this Golden Locks of Eight Gates is also fake right?I believe the girl would agree with me" I look at him shocked as Yu and Fei look at me.I shrug and mouth 'I got cut off by Lao Fei when I was going to tell you guys' the middle nerd speaks again "Don't make things up." The guy smirks "My surname is Liu name is Bei and Zi is Xuan De.I'm the son of Lord Zhong San Jing.The family fortunes decline which is why I'm very poor.The most expensive thing that can be found on my body is the royal blood running in my veins.But,my blood type is O.The payment is always low when I go to sell blood;what a shame" I put my palm against my fist "I'm Mei Xing" Yu and Fei do the same "I'm Guan Yu" "I'm Zhang Fei" He does the same to us

   Guan Yu asks "May i ask how you know this formation is fake?" Liu Bei lets out a small laugh "To tell you the truth,in order to earn a living,I sell imitation products.The one people call bootlegger is me.I can easily see through imitation products." Zhang Fei nods saying oh then turns to the nerds "Wei!Hurry and open the door.We're going to be late for class on the first day of school.Why did you set up a fake battle formation?" The middle nerd speaks again "This fake battle formation is to scare off the Yellow Kerchief Thieves.The Yellow Kerchief Thieves are seizing schools everywhere,how can we not be afraid?" The gate to the school starts to open Guan Yu takes my hand and we start walking towards the gate with the other two behind us.An alarm goes off and the gate quickly close.I hear motion behind us and quickly turn around walking to the front of the fake battle formation.Yellow Kerchief Thieves.Guan Yu and Zhang Fei quickly get in front of me blocking me for any attack.The leader comes out "I'm the discipline supervisor of Huang Jin  High School Zhang Bao,Thank You bootlegger for helping me identify the fake battle formation." He laughs then motions his people to kick down the gates.

   The speaker goes on from the school but I drowned it out not caring just like how I just drowned out Zhang Fei,I am evil....hehehe "Less Nonsense,hurry up and open the gate!" says Zhang Bao...I believe...I forgot okay?! He keeps talkign "Huang Jin High School is definitely taking over this school today!The four of you are lucky that you haven't done the enrollment process.If not you would've died together with the others." Guan Yu looks back at Zhang Fei and nods. Zhang Fei takes out my ipod and puts my ear buds in my ear playing my music and covers my eyes.

________A few Hours later_______

    Guan walks hand in hand with me as we walk in the forest type path.I contiue to listen to my music as we walk.We walk into this temple like place before we walk up the steps I quickly take out my ear buds turning off my ipod and putting it in my bag.I bow and then start to go up the steps "Uh...Why did she do that?" I hear Liu Bei behind me "I was trained to respect any temple.It is a big deal for me." I said ahead of the boys. Zhang Fei catches up to me "Mei Xing Liu Bei,Lao Guan and I are going to become sworn brothers!You will have another brother!" I look at Guan Yu in shock...He nods.I sigh and continue to go up the steps.I lead them to a small temple building. "You can do the sworing here.I will be walking around good luck...brothers" They nod as I walk off.I felt someone watching us as we walk here.Weird...I suddenly hear a crash and groaning.Along with Zhang Fei and Guan Yu fighting.I quickly run over to them and up the steps to where they were pushing past four guys watching them.I run behind Guan Yu and Zhang Fei tries to stop him from killing himself.I put press on the pressure point in his shoulder making him go to sleep.I sigh "I leave you three alone and this is what happens?!" Zhang Fei tries to calm me down "Mei Xing Guan Yu would not like you acting like this." I slowly calm down looking at my older brothers figure "Fine."We turn to the four guys who are slowly walking up to us.

   I reach into my boot taking out my bowstafs pressing a button and making it bigger.Zhang Fei gets into a fighting position but quickly gets up from it and tries to wake up my brother.The four guys fan out.I stand up straight with my bowstaff next to me.One smiles "You sir Ma'am.Hi.The four of us have nothing against you." I look over to Zhang Fei and see him talking to himself in his mind.He smiles and says "Sorry for being rude...I also have nothing against you.My big brother just had a mishap,it's made me confused,I apologise if I did something inappropriate." The one to speak first from the four speaks again "It's okay,you did nothing wrong.Sorry for being rude." Zhang Fei says "Big Brother,you're such an unfortunate person,you walked right into an unexpected calamity.Big Brother,may you go in peace" Liu Bei mumbles "Where do you want me to go?" Zhang Fei gasps as I look at Liu Bei with wide eyes. "Big Brother you didn't die.That's great." I walk over to the rock handing Zhang Hei my bowstaff I make a crcle movement with my hand then hitting the boulder with my palm.Knocking it off Liu Bei. Zhang Fei kneels down next to him "Big Brither are you okay?" Liu Bei opens his eyes "Of course I'm not okay" Zhang Fei takes his hand off him "That's true.Others specially perform Breaking of Stone with ones chest,You're breaking one's chest with stone." he says laughing I swing my bowstaff hitting him in the head as Liu Bei says "It is not funny at all." We look towards the four guys another asks "May I ask what happened?" Zhang Fei says "All of the sudden my Big Brother was crushed by an enormous rock" I giggle lightly and say softly "Wish I was there to see it."Zhang Fei glares at me I hold up my hands in surrender.The first one to talk talks again "Do you know where the rock came from?"

     Zhang Fei nods smiling "Of course I know." I watch the four guys look at each other in shock. I contiune for Zhang Fei in a soft voice looking at them with wonder in my eyes "The mountain area has had heavy rain.That results in loosening of the soil, all of you must be cautious.If not,who knows if anyone of you would get crushed too." The first on to speak looks at me and Zhang Fei with a serious face on "You're such a kind hearted person.Both of you.I really don't want to lie to you.Actually, this enormous rock falling was caused by me.I cause this misfortune.You can get revenge for your Big Brother.I won't avoid it.Go ahead!" The two next to him have their hands starting to glow. I look at them shocked He says "Ya Se,Xiao Yu and Xiu, I don't want you to interuppt us.If not,I'll feel bad for the rest of my life." Zhang Fei smiles lightly at him saying "After hearing what you've said,I think you are just like me.A chivalrous person.A true hero.It's alright I know you didn't do it on purpose.Besides that,I was thinking of attacking you all just now.We're even." They all look at me.I press a button on my cross bracelet making my bowstaff become a pen "I do not fight for a stupid reason.I only fight when I have to." Zhang Fei ruffles my hair and says "But now,my Big Brother, Liu Bei, was wounded because of the enromous rock,my second brother Guan Yu, wants to die with big brother.I don't know what to do."

   The same one who loves talking talks again "Big Brother Liu Bei,Second Brother Guan Yu,then you must be the youngest brother,Zhang Fei and the baby Mei Xing" Zhang Fei grins "You're so smart,correct on your final guess!" The guy smiles sliding his hand sin his pocket "Zhang Feil our names are the same as people from the Three Kingdoms,anyone can guess it." He looks at me shocked as I shrug. Zhang Fei says "What three kingdoms?Why can anyone guess it?" The second one to speak speaks again "But why is your face not dark?" "How do you know my face can be blackened?" says Zhang Fei pointing at him.Things stay silent for a bit but one of the guys says "I got a plan" The one next to him draps an arm over his shoulder and says "What is it?Hurry and say it." He contiues "We can bring Liu Bei back to treat him in the Gold Dimension,and leave Xiu here to be Liu Bei to maintain the flow of the dimension." The one name Xiu says "The plan sounds...you must be kidding!" One smiles at him and says "No." Zhang Fei agrees "I also think that this is a good idea." The one that said no says "Shakespeare said:A successful liar doesn't have to keep lying to live,because those who were lied to become his guardians" I look at him and say "Shakespeare said:A fool thinks himself to be wise,but a wise man knows himself to be a fool." Everyone looks at me shocked.I shrug. Zhang Fei says "Why are their subtitles when you both spoke?" Two of the men look out in space wondering that as well.

    The one who came up with the plan says "No matter what,the only problem now is whether Liu Bei's points reach eight thousand.Can he travel throught the dimension door?" Zhang Fei looks at him confused "What are fighting points?What is the dimension door?" The first one to speak speaks again "It's a long story,Brother" Zhang Fei smiles at him "Summarize it then." The one who said it was a logn story says "Okay" happily then starts to explain quickly walking up to Zhang Fei "Overall it's..." He makes weird hand moments while making mummur sounds. The he sets his hand on Zhang Fei's shoulder and says "Understand?This is this,that is that." Zhang Fei looks at him confused "Brother,What he is trying to say is It means what we call martial art points is what they call fighting points,and must be more or less around ten thousand.It's just Liu Bei is seriously wounded,there is only a quarter of his strength left.If the three of you transfer some of your strength to him,there shouldn't be a problem to travel through the dimension door." They all nod besides Xiu.
 

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