Hello my lovely AFF family!

I am requesting a bit of help from readers and writers <3 my dream has always been to publish one of my novels. My best friend got her sister (who is an editor) to review one of my stories. Her sister is very picky with her stories it took my best friend months to get her to finally agreed. Then she told my best friend that she and her friend would love to read my stories. Please help this future with feedback on my stories.

Note that I will change the characters’ names (obviously, I will not leave k-pop stars I do not wish to get lawsuit :D) and the storyline might change a bit. However, If I get feedback story wise, I will keep everyone updated and might post it on AFF after all the editing is done <3 for all the support of everyone gives me <3 

The stories I had in mine to publish would be the following below:

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The Criminal & The Dancer

About Story: South Korea known worldwide for their beautiful culture and enormous opportunities. Two young men come to Seoul for vacation and end up falling into the dark desires with two criminals.

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Ghost Writer

About Story: Two newly weds move to a new home and find a blank notebook under a cracked floor board. Jennie open the notebook days later, to her surprised she saw a couple of pages filled and it dated the first entry April 19th, 1961.

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Thousand Years

About Story: Sometimes humans wonder what is it like in the afterlife. It surprises a lot of them when they see their other half or fall in love. Our first story tells us of a warrior who fought in the war, but as he died loosing his memory. As he awoke, in the couldn’t remember nothing and thousand of years later he finally meet his lover, but not in the way he had expected. Our second story will talk of a prince who fell in love with a peasant as time passed his forced fiancée finds out and sends guards to kill the boy. The prince becomes a ruthless King and feels no compassion over his kingdom. He only felt empty after losing the light in his life. The King felt he was going mad the moment he saw the boy he loved again in the forbidden forest cover in butterflies waiting for him.

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Behind The Forbidden Gate

About Story: Two worlds separated by a wall and an enormous gate awaiting to be opened. Vampires holding their hunger while the wolves live freely in their land. When the two worlds taste the forbidden fruit, their worlds clash an war begins. 

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Thank you for everyone who will support me on this <3