Some clarification for Two Moons

Henlo everyone! 

I went through Two Moons and a small surprise will await you in a bit, but before that I want to clarify some stuff because I found some inconsistencies in the story which I never would have noticed if I hadn't gone through the story again. Besides the typos, stylistic choices, wrong tenses and the usual things that are noticeable, here are the things that I need to clarify the most.

1. Prosperity High is not a high school.

The original story setting of Two Moons was a high school setting, before I have decided to the rewrite the story, some of you might still remember the original story. I noticed this because I tend to use the word school a lot because we have no real colleges in Germany. College would probably equal to the last years of our high school, before we go to uni or start an apprenticeship. 

2. The ages of the characters.

I changed all the characters ages now and made them older. I never excplicitely told the ages of the characters, except Mao and Rui. Listing every character would be a bit much now, so I just tell the ages of the most necessary characters. ( I went through the story on AFF and changed the ages accordingly).

Rui, Siyeon, Kyungsoo: 19

Kai, Chanyeol, Sehun, Baek, Kinji: 20

Pýr, Matsuda, Mori: 21

Mao: 24

Before any of you come and give me heat for Siyeon's and Mao's , my husband and I are having the same . Siyeon's legally a full grown, consenting adult and she will make her own decisions regarding that.

3. The harem.

Siyeon will of course not end up with all the guys who have a crush on her in the story. She will break some hearts (later on, maybe, eventually). For the MaoxSiyeon shippers, you guys don't need to worry since Mao is probably my favourite OC character and I would break my own heart if I would break them up T_T

 

4. New characters.

I never noticed how many characters this story has, and I am amazed how I managed to keep up with that a couple of years back without losing oversight of it. With my new writing program it's definitely easy so I promise that there won't be as many inconsistencies.

I faintly remember that I had given you the chance to incorporate your own characters into the story but I sadly have lost the notes, so I will just add the characters I already have mentioned and maybe 1 or 2 more. If I have the time I try to make a character graph so that you guys will get an overview.

 

That's all for now guys!

 

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sujushineeroc #1
I'm so glad to hear you're working on this again - I remember that I couldn't believe how you kept all the characters clear back then either! I'm really looking forward to rereading the parts I remember and seeing how the story develops!
hasegawa_asuka #2
Fantastic! I am clear and will sit back and wait for your new updates! I am so excited to learn that you decided to return to AFF and most importantly, continue writing! Don't waste your talent, you are a great writer and author! Chilled~
hasegawa_asuka #3
Fantastic! I am clear and will sit back and wait for your new updates! I am so excited to learn that you decided to return to AFF and most importantly, continue writing! Don't waste your talent, you are a great writer and author! Chilled~
eksogirl99
#4
i’m starting to re read again lol and i love Siyeon x Mao so i’m glad that you said i don’t need to worry about that. but here i’m secretly wishing for Sehun to re enter in her love life again
candy_ellia #5
Time to reread the story again 😂 so excited to read again after so many years 💕 thank you for coming back 🥳
isonetaeng #6
Thank you so much for coming back and continuing this story. Since you already back I will definitely re read the story to keep up all the new updates for you.
Rb2012 #7
Ooooh nice
Damia_Song123 #8
Amazing as always ^^
PrincessSunflower
#9
I have been a huge fan over the years, and has read this fic at least 10 times. I super happy that you decided to bring it back since its soo good and if you ever get ro publish this, I will be the one of the first to buy it! ❤
yeolseri
#10
Lol me too if Mao and Siyeon breakup I would be so sad. I love MaoxSiyeon and their old married couple vibe. And Thanks for clarifying theseeee and specially their age. Looking forward to the rest of the story!
B1A4lover #11
this all sounds really great! i was continuously under the impression that prosperity high was a high school 😂 but also am aware that ‘college’ in america is not equivalent to ‘college’ in europe but rather uni. really excited !!
tara2000
#12
Thank you sooooo muchhhh<3<3<3<3
Looking forward to the story