RE-writing my old story

https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/571146
link to the ongoing rewritten "Birth of the Black and White pearls" the story is very different so far, but the bones of the story are basically the same. eventually i will incorporate chapter one of the original story into the new one. Characters have been redesigned and renamed, since I wrote it on inkitt which isnt really full of asian/kpop fans. lol some charecter have been cut, possibly temporarily.

Would love any feedback!

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