I found my first attempt at writing Fanfiction

I just found this and it is so bad that I want to cry ahhahahah
This is from back in 2013 if I remember correctly. Read with caution and only if you read my newer works too. Otherwise I will die of shame.

WHAT EVEN IS THIS FIRST PERSON PERSPECTIVE

 

 


 

 

Baekhyun POV

Wow how awesome. It's the first day of the new school year and I’m already late. I’m always late so I usually don’t mind this much. But today i have to get a good seat because otherwise i'm forced to sit with the losers. Still sleepy, I got up and went to the bathroom.

As I was getting ready in the bathroom, my mother shouted if I knew that it was already half past seven. Sure I know. I didn’t answer. I put gel into my hair and applied some eyeliner. I looked great. As always. I know why I’m this popular – I mean look at me. I’m perfect. Finishing the daily routine I sang some strange song I heard at the radio yesterday to keep me entertained. As soon as I was done I walked back to my room, took my school stuff and threw my backpack over my shoulders. Walking down the stairs my mother talked to me. I didn’t listen–as always-and walked outside. Well it’s the last time. Tomorrow I’ll be in the apartment Zitao and I rented. Everything will be so much easier without my parents and my annoying brother.

I took my scooter and started the motor. People were looking at me. They always do. I’m used to it. But it’s even worse when I wear a leather jacket like I do now- it’s not that I don’t like it. I mean do you really think I don’t want to be like this? I tried to look as cool as possible as I crossed the streets filled with people. Two more minutes until the bell rings. I drove faster passing all the cars on the road. I mean I don’t mind being late, but I didn’t want to sit somewhere in the back where all the losers are seated. And If I came late on the first day this will be the consequence. Finally! There it is. I drove into the school yard, parked my scooter and hurried upstairs to my classroom. I let out a sigh. There they are again. My best friend and his Girlfriend. They really look cute together. I think they are the perfect couple; though Zitao can be really annoying and Narae can be really y sometimes. They always seem to stick together though. I waved at them as soon as they saw me running up the stairs. “Baek why did I know I would see you running up these stairs once again?” Zitao said with a mischievous grin on his face “” I said and got into the classroom. Zitao and Narae followed me – Narae laughing at my bad mood and Zitao smiling all over his face. Yeah I missed them. My classmates were looking at me the same way they used to do the last few years. They watched me with envy and admiration. There were only 4 people I like to talk to. Zitao, Narae, Yifan (even though I never call him Yifan – I prefer to call him Kriseus) and Narae's best friend Boa. All the others didn’t even try to start a conversation with me. I’m way over their level and they know it.

Zitao and Narae luckily guarded a seat next to them for me. I threw my backpack next to the chair and let myself fall on the chair. Taorae sat down next to me – still smiling. “We missed you” Narae said I ignored her – They know my morning mood is bad so why are they playing with me?

My mood sunk even deeper when our Teacher entered the room and smiled at the class. Aish, how much I hate this guy. “Good morning class! I’m happy to see you all again. I’m sure we’ll have a great last year. So please work hard. This year will start a bit different. There will be two new Students in this class.” He turned to the door, “Come in please.” Two guys entered the room. One was really tall. He was massive WOOW ok this guy was really hot. His legs were long and thin, his chest was flat but still muscular, even though I can’t tell so well – He’s wearing a grey V-neck shirt with a black front. And his legs. Have I told you about his legs already? Those tight black pants. His face was covered with big black sunglasses. His Hair was red and absolutely perfect. I have to say. This. Guy. Is. . I’ll definitely make him mine. Next to him was a little squishy guy that looked like a penguin. Lots of people would call him cute… the thing I noticed was the fact that he held the Giant on the arm. He touched him. “Please introduce yourself to the class” Lim Sonsaengnim said and pulled me out of my thoughts. The small squishy guy started to talk:”Hello! I’m Do Kyungsoo and this is Park Chanyeol. We’ll be part of your class this year. Please take care of us.” They bowed and Lim Sonsaengnim told them to take a seat. Like I thought they chose a seat in the back near the window. This Do Kyungsoo never let go of Park Chanyeol. My Park Chanyeol. His name was as beautiful as himself. What am I even thinking? I shook my head and tried to pay attention to Lim Sonsaengnim and his never ending speech about motivation, rules and behaviour.


 

 

the worst thing probably is that I actually wrote several chapters of this abomination. Too sad I cannot find them XD I only have this first chapter on my dropbox. Maybe I should look for it on my old laptop XDDD but at the same time I don't want to see this ever again

 

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gojiyeong
#1
This is an absolutely wonderful piece and I don’t see why you would ever be ashamed of it! 😇
More seriously, i guess you had to go through that to get where you are now eheh
ShawolRidsi
#2
This is so cute

(>_<)

All fluffy fluffy.... gosh what is this even, it's like you wrote this when you were high on sugar, full of energy writing and comical anecdotes. Gosh, it's hard to find stories like this these days, only a hand few are present there. Please do us a favour and if you find the other remaining chapters please pretty please post it here. Would love to read it . It's just so cute!!!

Clumsy cute beginning of our awesome Authornim

Always love you

Hwighting !!
shojinryori #3
It’s adorable! :D

Are the losers sitting up the back? Here the cool kids sit up the back (of the classroom, bus, whatever) and the nerds sit up the front.
JKJHKBMHTM #4
this is kind of hilarious. I have read all of your fanfictions and this is just so cute I can't. It reminds me of something I once wrote.
On another note: if you ever find the other chapters please share them. i am kind of strangely into this. it throws me back to 2014 when i started reading fanfiction ^-^