What Do You Think? Advice? Tips? Lol

Hey so I've been busying myself with nothing and I suddenly feel like making a poster for a non-existent story. I've always been interested in graphics but never serious just for fun and for stories that I read and feeling inspired to make poster for them. I usually do that. And now I did one again. For me it's okay. But still you can see the lackness of it haha. But anyway here it is. 
 

What do you guys think? About the poster? And also about the story of it? If this is a real written story what do you think the story would be? Please give me your comments~ 

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miladee__
#1
You're getting better at it! Anyway, you should write the story of this poster, I think you'll make it great :D

About the story, I don't really have any idea, I mean the gloomy color might show a lot of angst will take place. But if I have be honest, I'm not a fan of a story where two girls are chasing over the same guy, so I hope one of them is not having any love interest on Sehun, lol.
Pearllin
#2
Uff so beautiful. This looks like it would be a good poster for an angst story with some painful childhood memories of each character, like that carousel suggest so.

Something like how the characters want things to stay consistent in life, like how the carousel moves in only a certain pattern.

But then the gloomy background suggests that that won't happen. That things are bound to change.

The title "game of hearts" deepens the sense of angst in the story. Would love to see the next designs you do. This is beautifulll~~